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If Only
Contributed by
cheech
on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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sitting here thinking back t a time
when everything was fine,hoping days like
that will soon return for all these
bad days that go on and on
nothing is going right,i nees a good day
and you do too,i'm sorry,what else can i say
nothing i ever do is right,nothing is the way
we all need it to be
if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears
i know you need to know,but i can't tell you
something that i don't know,i still love you
how can i show you that i really do
don't worry i know you love me too
theres so many things that i should have
told you,things that you may not care about
but things you should know about me that
no one else cares to hear
you were my first love but you're not my only
now i'm here without you and i feel lonely
thinking about you,i start to cry
but i can't go back,sitting here looking to the sky
if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears
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2004-04-15 22:02:20]
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Re: If Only
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by booboo on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:07:32 PM AEST
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its always nice to read your poetry,this was an excellent write,it seems like you're unsure about your feelings for this adam dude,but deep down you know you really do love him,it also seems like you're confused about more than just your feelings for him,loved this poem it was heart touching!!!!
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Re: If Only
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by the_story_of_the_year on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:25:04 PM AEST
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| beautiful, i hope you get him back! |
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Re: If Only
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by emystar on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:56:24 PM AEST
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wow, this should melt them.
Very good write.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy |
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Re: If Only
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST
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| beautifully put, I hope he reads this and you can have what you long to hear and hold. |
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Re: If Only
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by vampyrekiss on
Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM AEST
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golly gee this is really good and hehe its funny cause my boyfriend now name is adam and we had broken up before so i can totaly relate to this KEEP IT UP your a wicked good writer
vampyr |
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