Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 09-June 16:01:24 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 43438 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If Only [time] => 2004-04-15 22:02:20 [hometext] => Adam,theres alot we should reconsider,but i still love you [bodytext] => sitting here thinking back t a time
when everything was fine,hoping days like
that will soon return for all these
bad days that go on and on

nothing is going right,i nees a good day
and you do too,i'm sorry,what else can i say
nothing i ever do is right,nothing is the way
we all need it to be

if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears

i know you need to know,but i can't tell you
something that i don't know,i still love you
how can i show you that i really do
don't worry i know you love me too

theres so many things that i should have
told you,things that you may not care about
but things you should know about me that
no one else cares to hear

you were my first love but you're not my only
now i'm here without you and i feel lonely
thinking about you,i start to cry
but i can't go back,sitting here looking to the sky

if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears [comments] => 5 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 24 [informant] => cheech [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
If Only

Contributed by cheech on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



sitting here thinking back t a time
when everything was fine,hoping days like
that will soon return for all these
bad days that go on and on

nothing is going right,i nees a good day
and you do too,i'm sorry,what else can i say
nothing i ever do is right,nothing is the way
we all need it to be

if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears

i know you need to know,but i can't tell you
something that i don't know,i still love you
how can i show you that i really do
don't worry i know you love me too

theres so many things that i should have
told you,things that you may not care about
but things you should know about me that
no one else cares to hear

you were my first love but you're not my only
now i'm here without you and i feel lonely
thinking about you,i start to cry
but i can't go back,sitting here looking to the sky

if only we could be together without the confusion
if only you could understand my tears
if only i didn't feel like i was in an institution
if only we could forget our fears




Copyright © cheech ... [ 2004-04-15 22:02:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by booboo on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:07:32 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
its always nice to read your poetry,this was an excellent write,it seems like you're unsure about your feelings for this adam dude,but deep down you know you really do love him,it also seems like you're confused about more than just your feelings for him,loved this poem it was heart touching!!!!


booboo!!!!!


Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:25:04 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
beautiful, i hope you get him back!


Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 10:56:24 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
wow, this should melt them.
Very good write.
luv, huggs, hope,
emy


Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 15th April 2004 @ 11:12:20 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
beautifully put, I hope he reads this and you can have what you long to hear and hold.


Re: If Only (User Rating: 1 )
by vampyrekiss on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 04:47:49 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
golly gee this is really good and hehe its funny cause my boyfriend now name is adam and we had broken up before so i can totaly relate to this KEEP IT UP your a wicked good writer
vampyr




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com