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Array ( [sid] => 43546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Lady Mystique [time] => 2004-04-16 18:04:14 [hometext] => This is a poem that will be published in my book that will soon be available... [bodytext] => Red velvet eyes lurk through the smokey air,
Rising above the murky clouds appears the tender mare.
Gallant streams of gold flicker in hope,
As criss cross rays devour and elope.

The mind of madness seperates into a mindless mishap,
Calmness invades the serenity of being entrap.
Streaks of hope fall into a pot of gold,
Allowing only the spirit that has become bold.

The mare allows itself to take that first step,
A step of independence, a step that is left unkept.
Future plans and future dreams,
Is all that is left to be filled in the gold of streams.

Fly my angel and don't let go,
A mare soon to be an angel in the golden flow.
What appears to my eyes but a tender woman's face,
A woman's face filled with a soft, tender body of lace. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 19 [informant] => scorpion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Lady Mystique

Contributed by scorpion on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:04:14 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Red velvet eyes lurk through the smokey air,
Rising above the murky clouds appears the tender mare.
Gallant streams of gold flicker in hope,
As criss cross rays devour and elope.

The mind of madness seperates into a mindless mishap,
Calmness invades the serenity of being entrap.
Streaks of hope fall into a pot of gold,
Allowing only the spirit that has become bold.

The mare allows itself to take that first step,
A step of independence, a step that is left unkept.
Future plans and future dreams,
Is all that is left to be filled in the gold of streams.

Fly my angel and don't let go,
A mare soon to be an angel in the golden flow.
What appears to my eyes but a tender woman's face,
A woman's face filled with a soft, tender body of lace.

Copyright © scorpion ... [ 2004-04-16 18:04:14]
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Re: Lady Mystique (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:18:36 PM AEST
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interesting:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Lady Mystique (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 06:28:42 PM AEST
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I loved the title it just drew my eye. This was quite interesting and unique to read.

Kie

Re: Lady Mystique (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 04:48:47 AM AEST
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Nice poem, it has lots of vivid imagery in it. Hope you change 'seperates' to 'separates' before it goes to print . . . and good luck with it. Nice to hear someone here will be published!

Re: Lady Mystique (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:46:43 AM AEST
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very well done good luck with your book sales.

wildej.

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