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Brew anger within his juvenile mind;
A mind snared by religious fanatics.
Who, in turn, drove a nation wild,
Perturbed by erroneous conscience.

Gyrated by imperious contemporaries,
He grew with agony and wrath.
Furtively in his dreams & ambitions,
He swore he would strike back.

Day by day, month by month,
He planned in stealth & faith.
Accumulated an insidious front,
‘Al-Qaeda’ was its name.

93’ was an auspicious year,
Which reposed caustically, in his turbid mind;
When the U.S chose to retire,
After been struck blind.

Influenced by such iniquity,
From a nation famine-struck,
He stimulated his own curiosity,
To colossal thoughts of lust:

Bombed the WTC for the first time;
Upon the nation he loathed.
Bombed U.S embassies in Tanzania, Kenya—
‘For my people’, so he thought.

The culmination of ‘Jihad’ was appalling,
To all those who had eyes to see.
To see thy twin towers eradicated,
Like a scourged, massive tree.

So much blood shed—
For the love of god?
Why, why, take a mere mans head,
When your god is fraud ?

-Thivanka.

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OSAMA

Contributed by Thivanka on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:09:40 AM in AEST
Topic: AmericanTragedy

Osama.

Brew anger within his juvenile mind;
A mind snared by religious fanatics.
Who, in turn, drove a nation wild,
Perturbed by erroneous conscience.

Gyrated by imperious contemporaries,
He grew with agony and wrath.
Furtively in his dreams & ambitions,
He swore he would strike back.

Day by day, month by month,
He planned in stealth & faith.
Accumulated an insidious front,
‘Al-Qaeda’ was its name.

93’ was an auspicious year,
Which reposed caustically, in his turbid mind;
When the U.S chose to retire,
After been struck blind.

Influenced by such iniquity,
From a nation famine-struck,
He stimulated his own curiosity,
To colossal thoughts of lust:

Bombed the WTC for the first time;
Upon the nation he loathed.
Bombed U.S embassies in Tanzania, Kenya—
‘For my people’, so he thought.

The culmination of ‘Jihad’ was appalling,
To all those who had eyes to see.
To see thy twin towers eradicated,
Like a scourged, massive tree.

So much blood shed—
For the love of god?
Why, why, take a mere mans head,
When your god is fraud ?

-Thivanka.

Copyright © Thivanka ... [ 2004-04-17 10:09:40]
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Re: OSAMA (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 10:33:55 AM AEST
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Osama bin laden is a religious fanatic that never grew up. With his wealth he could have built schools and hospitals in other words he could have helped his fellow Muslim Brothers and Sisters not wasted his wealth on crime against humanity. Thanks for the poem.

bernard

Re: OSAMA (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 08:34:30 PM AEST
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Awesome masterpeice!
You've done a great job with this write!
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: OSAMA (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 01:47:17 AM AEST
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very good poem i agree with bernards comments all that wealth could/should be put to good use.

wildej.

Re: OSAMA (User Rating: 1 )
by Mihiri on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:29:33 AM AEST
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Very interesting. Yeah, I must agree with you about Osama's behaviour, but I don't understand the final part about 'When your god is fraud", who are you asking that? Osama or the US? But, nevertheless, this is a wonderful piece of poetry! Bravo! Encore! Mihiri

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