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[sid] => 4362
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Withering Rose Clouded Sun
[time] => 2002-09-28 08:00:00
[hometext] => This is a bit rough... no revisions or editing done. I jotted it down quickly this afternoon before I left for work and just figured I'd post it as is.
If you've read my other work then you should know the significance of the Sun and the Rose... the Cloud... I'm sure you'll figure it out. [bodytext] => The rose begins to blossom Basking in rays from his sun Sun soon covered by dark cloud True loves only separation Rose desires warmth of sun Sun yearns for roses love Cloud comes between them Holding back sun from above As sun moves across the sky Rose prays for her glorious shine Thick dark cloud keeps them apart Time after time Cloud holding back the sun Keeping her hidden away Rose sits in clouds shadow Hoping for brighter day Every now and then Sun peeks through the cloud Shines her love upon the rose Roses heart sings aloud Brightness of love soon covered By dusky cloud once more Rose waits patiently in darkness For the sun he’s grown to adore Cloud keeps suns beauty Concealed from roses sight Rose fears end of day And coming lonely night Without his sun the rose will die Wither and fade away Out of shade into suns love The rose would like to stay Without the rose the sun shalln’t feel As needed as she is Rose whishes cloud to pass by So the sun will be only his The thickness of the cloud Keeps her light from shining through Without her love to help him grow What is the rose to do? Rose leans forward toward sun Hoping she’ll break herself free Move past cloud that stands between So their love, unfettered, can be [comments] => 4 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 2 [informant] => MisterRight [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
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