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Array ( [sid] => 43626 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => What Can I Do? [time] => 2004-04-17 12:17:42 [hometext] => Actually It's the second part of 'SO SWEET, SO WONDERFUL, ISN'T SHE?' Enjoy it... [bodytext] => Am I so close?
Am I so far?
Every night I watch the sky
Waiting for a sign, waiting for a fallen star…

What can I do?
Shall I give up?
Shall I ask her for a date?
I'm so afraid from my sad dirty fate…

Maybe she never thought about me
Maybe I'm the only one she can see…
Maybe my mystery way confuses her mind
Maybe she is attracting me, but I'm so blind…

What can I do?
Shall I run to her?
Shall I wait?
I'm so scared to open my eyes
Finding the time is too late…

Is it admiring that I have for her?
Is it self-satisfaction, Is it love?
Is it something special that sent from above?

What can I do?
But I like it anyway
It's so good, it's so pure
The flash of her smile
Makes me have nothing to say…

In my wakens
In my sleep
Her vision surrounds me
Her whisper is deep…

What can I do?
Will the papers reply?
Waiting like a plant
In it's way to dry
Waiting for your water to vivify me
Before I fade and die… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 537 [topic] => 55 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
What Can I Do?

Contributed by OMEGA_ on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 12:17:42 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



Am I so close?
Am I so far?
Every night I watch the sky
Waiting for a sign, waiting for a fallen star…

What can I do?
Shall I give up?
Shall I ask her for a date?
I'm so afraid from my sad dirty fate…

Maybe she never thought about me
Maybe I'm the only one she can see…
Maybe my mystery way confuses her mind
Maybe she is attracting me, but I'm so blind…

What can I do?
Shall I run to her?
Shall I wait?
I'm so scared to open my eyes
Finding the time is too late…

Is it admiring that I have for her?
Is it self-satisfaction, Is it love?
Is it something special that sent from above?

What can I do?
But I like it anyway
It's so good, it's so pure
The flash of her smile
Makes me have nothing to say…

In my wakens
In my sleep
Her vision surrounds me
Her whisper is deep…

What can I do?
Will the papers reply?
Waiting like a plant
In it's way to dry
Waiting for your water to vivify me
Before I fade and die…




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Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Saturday, 17th April 2004 @ 07:09:30 PM AEST
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this was for some1 that i really care for but i still donno what kinda of care ...


Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 12:09:06 PM AEST
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i find this really sad. i wish you luck tho.
this write was so well written. i really enjoyed it.
Arden


Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:12:27 AM AEST
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Wow now this is beautifull!
u should tell her how u feel.
she must be someone really special.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: What Can I Do? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jarmen_Kell on Friday, 15th October 2004 @ 04:18:18 AM AEST
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"Non ti ingannerai
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di ognuno di noi...."




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