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[title] => Hating this wonderful life
[time] => 2004-04-18 01:31:47
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So much joy i used to find, living a lie
Around me such beauty, exploring the unknown
I really hate being here, alive, unfeeling
How can i function properly if i feel
Too much pressure, life falling into disarray
Relationship crumbling before my very eyes
Within windowless stares and fake smiles
A one-way ticket you see, within the hell that lies inside of me
I want you to feel it, so i don’t feel so alone
Yet you do, and we just say hi, how are you
What a stupid question, why do you even care
Underneath it all, you are like me, not really there
Living a lie, biding your time
Till the reaper brings relief
I can’t wait till that time he swings his scythe
Takes me from this pathetic world i love so much
Maybe i prefer the easy way out, leave without so much a shout
Just love the feeling of control i hold in my hand
Only 3 minutes and that would be it, no-more pain
NO more pressure, no-more feeling, no-more...
I pray at night to take me, but i curse every morning i awake
Back into this cesspool once again
As i stare and turn the bottle between my fingers
whispering no-more
no-more
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Hating this wonderful life
Contributed by
silent
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:31:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
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So much joy i used to find, living a lie
Around me such beauty, exploring the unknown
I really hate being here, alive, unfeeling
How can i function properly if i feel
Too much pressure, life falling into disarray
Relationship crumbling before my very eyes
Within windowless stares and fake smiles
A one-way ticket you see, within the hell that lies inside of me
I want you to feel it, so i don’t feel so alone
Yet you do, and we just say hi, how are you
What a stupid question, why do you even care
Underneath it all, you are like me, not really there
Living a lie, biding your time
Till the reaper brings relief
I can’t wait till that time he swings his scythe
Takes me from this pathetic world i love so much
Maybe i prefer the easy way out, leave without so much a shout
Just love the feeling of control i hold in my hand
Only 3 minutes and that would be it, no-more pain
NO more pressure, no-more feeling, no-more...
I pray at night to take me, but i curse every morning i awake
Back into this cesspool once again
As i stare and turn the bottle between my fingers
whispering no-more
no-more
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silent
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2004-04-18 01:31:47]
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Hurretje on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:38:05 AM AEST
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You sound very down here, although I read some sparks of..what is it... You want to leave here, but there are some things holding you down to this earth... Interesting, although I hope you find a lot more reasons to stay here...
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:49:45 AM AEST
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| beautiful expression of feelings, i hope you know many care about you and i for one, am always here to talk with, may you have brighter days soon, dear friend, hugs n' love nessa x @->>->- |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Dizza_13 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 01:51:10 AM AEST
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wow. Shows so much, a single sentence tells a story. Very sad but so much more touching. That was really good. U can get through this.
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:12:05 AM AEST
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Wow silent... that was tragic... yet so fascinating... i had to read it like 5 times... you know if at any time you need to talk, im always around... please never hesitate... cheers to a poem of this magnitude... hoping you feel better soon...
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Chrissylee on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 06:58:37 AM AEST
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| nice write and can understand where your coming from been down that road before |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by arden on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:17:31 AM AEST
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this is deep stuff silent. so packed full of depth and emotion. i really am speechless.
i can relate to this. well done , it was written wonderfully. keep it up.
Arden |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 02:29:12 PM AEST
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Yeah Right... Ya know ya want it....
Whisper |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 06:22:29 AM AEST
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Some nights become empty and days are dark, but knowing here is a place of souls exchanging, makes it easier.
Thank you for being one such soul. |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 09:35:17 AM AEST
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Of course I can't help but wonder if this is a fantasy or how you really feel. I really did hold the bottle in my hand more than once. I am still glad that I chose life. I do love this world. Every tough time teaches us a little more. A sad and telling write.
Stitch |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Avarice_Riot on
Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:56:39 AM AEST
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| Yeah, I know exactly where you're coming from. I hate this world but I love it in a sense. Gah, I'm screwed up. @_@ |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by JennyFruFru on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 08:48:33 PM AEST
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| i feel your pain... i hate this wonderful life that everyone cherishes the world is a cruel cruel place.... |
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Re: Hating this wonderful life
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by Kie on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 09:50:09 PM AEST
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A very powerful poem. Pain takes us to a place that is so hard to express sometimes and you did it in a very powerful way.
I felt this poem.
Kie |
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