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Array ( [sid] => 43725 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Set Me Free [time] => 2004-04-18 08:54:11 [hometext] => im trapped, slowly sinking deep into depression once again.............. [bodytext] => Where did you go,
Why did you leave me here,

Crying inside,
All alone,

Missing you,
Where ever you are,

You set me free,
Without you Im caged,

Trapped inside myself,
Set me free,

Stare at the ciealing,
Needing you here,

Where have you gone,
Why were you pulled away,

Seperated to opposite ends of the world,
So far away and so alone,

Why do I yearn for you so much,
Is this what they call love,

Well all I know is that it hurts,
Painful yet beautiful,

Why dose it cause me pain,
Do you feel the same,

The same hurt,
The same passion for me,

I need you to be free,
To fly to escape,

Nothing I do can achive that,
The wonderous high,

No one else gives me that feeling,
Nobody can set me free,

Only you,
No one but you,

Everything I do without you is worthless,
No meaning in it,

Thats why I need you,
Your my one,

Your love makes me whole,
Take away all my pain,

Suffering replaced with love,
Trapped then set free,

You brought me out of myself,
No longer a hermit with you,

You bring out the best in me,
Life with you can go on,

Im nothing without you,
I was nothing,

Then you came alone,
Showed me,

You saw through me,
Through my shell,

Broke through my skin,
Reached inside,

Told me things never heard befour,
Made me feel again,

I need you here,
Comforting touch,

Alone without you,
Dying slowly,

Shrinking back,
Down and away,

Sliding deep again,
Closeing off,

Come to me,
Save me,

Im Trapped,
Set me free, [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 2 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Set Me Free

Contributed by TwEeK on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:54:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Where did you go,
Why did you leave me here,

Crying inside,
All alone,

Missing you,
Where ever you are,

You set me free,
Without you Im caged,

Trapped inside myself,
Set me free,

Stare at the ciealing,
Needing you here,

Where have you gone,
Why were you pulled away,

Seperated to opposite ends of the world,
So far away and so alone,

Why do I yearn for you so much,
Is this what they call love,

Well all I know is that it hurts,
Painful yet beautiful,

Why dose it cause me pain,
Do you feel the same,

The same hurt,
The same passion for me,

I need you to be free,
To fly to escape,

Nothing I do can achive that,
The wonderous high,

No one else gives me that feeling,
Nobody can set me free,

Only you,
No one but you,

Everything I do without you is worthless,
No meaning in it,

Thats why I need you,
Your my one,

Your love makes me whole,
Take away all my pain,

Suffering replaced with love,
Trapped then set free,

You brought me out of myself,
No longer a hermit with you,

You bring out the best in me,
Life with you can go on,

Im nothing without you,
I was nothing,

Then you came alone,
Showed me,

You saw through me,
Through my shell,

Broke through my skin,
Reached inside,

Told me things never heard befour,
Made me feel again,

I need you here,
Comforting touch,

Alone without you,
Dying slowly,

Shrinking back,
Down and away,

Sliding deep again,
Closeing off,

Come to me,
Save me,

Im Trapped,
Set me free,

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-04-18 08:54:11]
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Re: Set Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by shortchics_rock_07 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:26:40 AM AEST
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very good poem...really liked it...im sorry about your depression...i got it to...don't we all...i hope this person finds ur love and returns it...
~good lucks in the future~

Re: Set Me Free (User Rating: 1 )
by neglected1 on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:26:14 PM AEST
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... Im not one for the chop'd up poems but this yours was well writen.. i enjoyed it..

..!!I hope you are set free once again.. but once that time comes dont and it fails.. dont let yourself fall again.. there is always a good that comes with a bad.. but i think your doing well.. everyone has depression lost without a sense of direction.. but its how you manage it all//!!..

Luck to you

~neglected1~

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