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[sid] => 43782
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Eternity With Him
[time] => 2004-04-18 15:54:57
[hometext] => Please comment honestly. I am a beginner and hope to get some insight into my writing flaws. Thank you. God Bless!
[bodytext] => Dark as the night,
deep as the bay,
bright as the light,
of each day.
Sparkling like a star,
evident in my eyes,
with this love I have for you,
I know I'll never die.
[comments] => 10
[counter] => 171
[topic] => 43
[informant] => eternallyloved
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 23
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => oops
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Eternity With Him
Contributed by
eternallyloved
on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 03:54:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dark as the night,
deep as the bay,
bright as the light,
of each day.
Sparkling like a star,
evident in my eyes,
with this love I have for you,
I know I'll never die.
Copyright ©
eternallyloved
... [
2004-04-18 15:54:57]
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 04:47:33 PM AEST
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This is very good, it has a nice flow to it and was a joy to read.
well done |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by AnGeL_M on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:05:56 PM AEST
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Very Nice Write...Written So Well :-) Keep Em Coming ......
******LoVe***AnGeL*******
***************************** |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 05:34:00 PM AEST
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Another very inspirational piece...Loved it...
Jenni |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by brookiecookie02 on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 07:40:22 PM AEST
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| i LOVE this poem!! this is probably one of my fav poems ive read so far! keep writing!! u r VERY talanted |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by poetrygodslove on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:54:19 PM AEST
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| I LIKE the flow. it seems to had came fast. without a thought to come to make you think of something else it just flowed out. and i like it. good job |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by emystar on
Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 10:10:14 PM AEST
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Very good write, especially for a beginner.
Great writing.
luv, huggs, peace, hope,
emy |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by lostinmyself on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 07:13:45 AM AEST
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| i like this, the flow is really good. great write. *hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by Stitch on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 01:11:25 PM AEST
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Amen. Excellent. I know that rock so well.
Stitch |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by arden on
Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 03:47:50 PM AEST
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very very good. i loved this. short and sweet. well done this was awesome.
Arden |
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Re: Eternity With Him
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 01:18:06 AM AEST
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Good use of rhymes, short and sweet.... Good poem
Lindsey |
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