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Array ( [sid] => 43812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Welcome Irony [time] => 2004-04-18 20:13:14 [hometext] => When I was writing this I had an image of Cindarella. I wrote another stanza about images of the death of Father (Cinderella's dad died) but it was horrible so I left it as this because it seemed more complete.) [bodytext] => Opalesence exchanged for a fine whalebone needle,
to mend the holes of lies still unknown.
Leftover amber wasn't enough for a thimble,
each stitch grinding in closer to bone.

Embers equal tiny points reflected in dark eyes,
and nipping the end of the vastness.
Solemnly sewing rips and tears with stitches and ties,
to be burnt to meaningless ashes. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 141 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Suz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Welcome Irony

Contributed by Suz on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:13:14 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Opalesence exchanged for a fine whalebone needle,
to mend the holes of lies still unknown.
Leftover amber wasn't enough for a thimble,
each stitch grinding in closer to bone.

Embers equal tiny points reflected in dark eyes,
and nipping the end of the vastness.
Solemnly sewing rips and tears with stitches and ties,
to be burnt to meaningless ashes.

Copyright © Suz ... [ 2004-04-18 20:13:14]
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Re: Welcome Irony (User Rating: 1 )
by poet_of_anger on Sunday, 18th April 2004 @ 08:35:35 PM AEST
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very interesting, i like this, very well written, and though i would have like to see the stanza you left out, i will take you at your word that it was bad, although it may not have been, you never know.

Re: Welcome Irony (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 8th May 2004 @ 11:54:03 PM AEST
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this was a very nice poem. i do not see much correlation between this and cinderella though.

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