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Array ( [sid] => 44009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I needed you [time] => 2004-04-20 06:55:45 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m through, Thinking of things to say to you.
It’s true, I’ve said enough and so have you.
My life, It all depended on having you.

Because I needed you,
I gave my life, and everything that had for you.
What didn’t I do?
I gave myself and you just left me for dead.

To you, I gave myself and all my life just for you.
And then, You want an end and left me to die.
And now, I sit alone to burn and cry.
When you see, You just sit and wonder why.

Because I needed you,
I am alone but before I had you,
Now where are you?
I need you here but you’ve gone off and left me to die.

For you, I’d have given all could to be with you.
But now, All this depression I feel like i’m gonna drown.
I’ve tried, But I just can’t get over you.
You were, Everything I had you were my life and my all.

Because I needed you,
You picked up the gun and shot a hole right through my head.
How could you?
Just by looking at you, you healed my wounds what we had it all seemed so true.

I needed you,
And now that you’re gone I scream and I cry for you.
I really loved you,
My heart, my soul I gave it all to you.

You left, And I feel not love but hate for you.
In time, I will heal and get over you.
But right now, I hate all the time I spent with you.

My life in your hands,
I believed and you just left me for dead.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Dizza_13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I needed you

Contributed by Dizza_13 on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 06:55:45 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I’m through, Thinking of things to say to you.
It’s true, I’ve said enough and so have you.
My life, It all depended on having you.

Because I needed you,
I gave my life, and everything that had for you.
What didn’t I do?
I gave myself and you just left me for dead.

To you, I gave myself and all my life just for you.
And then, You want an end and left me to die.
And now, I sit alone to burn and cry.
When you see, You just sit and wonder why.

Because I needed you,
I am alone but before I had you,
Now where are you?
I need you here but you’ve gone off and left me to die.

For you, I’d have given all could to be with you.
But now, All this depression I feel like i’m gonna drown.
I’ve tried, But I just can’t get over you.
You were, Everything I had you were my life and my all.

Because I needed you,
You picked up the gun and shot a hole right through my head.
How could you?
Just by looking at you, you healed my wounds what we had it all seemed so true.

I needed you,
And now that you’re gone I scream and I cry for you.
I really loved you,
My heart, my soul I gave it all to you.

You left, And I feel not love but hate for you.
In time, I will heal and get over you.
But right now, I hate all the time I spent with you.

My life in your hands,
I believed and you just left me for dead.




Copyright © Dizza_13 ... [ 2004-04-20 06:55:45]
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Re: I needed you (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 02:52:15 PM AEST
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this almost sounds like the movie, Kill Bill... haunting and interesting, good writing! ;0)
~Remy~


Re: I needed you (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:34:24 AM AEST
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The same thing happend to me, i wrote a poem called 'My expression of hatred', you can relate to it im sure, as ive related to this


Re: I needed you (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 07:20:30 AM AEST
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wow..theres lots of emotion in here...its almost like u still want him but yet u want to hurt him as much as he hurt u.




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