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Array ( [sid] => 44114 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Could I Have Known [time] => 2004-04-20 20:43:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

how could i have known
you were deceiving me
from the very start
when i caught you
in your first lie
you just laughed
because you are much
older than you
pretended to be

you said it was
no big deal
because women lie
about their age
all of the time
that was just
the beginning
of the end of
the cyber romance
i thought was real
so wonderful
and true

it's not that
it ended badly still
your disappearing
into cyber space
without warning
took me my surprise
and stung for a moment
i might add

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 20 [informant] => faithmairee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InternetLove )

How Could I Have Known

Contributed by faithmairee on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:43:58 PM in AEST
Topic: InternetLove

how could i have known
you were deceiving me
from the very start
when i caught you
in your first lie
you just laughed
because you are much
older than you
pretended to be

you said it was
no big deal
because women lie
about their age
all of the time
that was just
the beginning
of the end of
the cyber romance
i thought was real
so wonderful
and true

it's not that
it ended badly still
your disappearing
into cyber space
without warning
took me my surprise
and stung for a moment
i might add

Copyright © faithmairee ... [ 2004-04-20 20:43:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: How Could I Have Known (User Rating: 1 )
by srugglingyoungster on Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 08:51:44 PM AEST
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funny how you can be lead on by someone....especially on the internet. You gotta be careful, i think you know that now. Sorry about what happened to you

Re: How Could I Have Known (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st April 2004 @ 12:03:09 AM AEST
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Never trust anything you can see with your eyes or touch with your hand. God is the only exception I have ever found to that rule. Internet relationships rarely ever work. People play games to satisfy their sick needy lives. It is sad, but true. I am so sorry you are hurting.

Rita

Re: How Could I Have Known (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 13th May 2004 @ 03:46:14 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
a bit sad but at least u know.
luv, huggs,
emy

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