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Her warm breath in my heart,
Her teasing whisper in my soul:
"I Exist Never Give Up or fall"

Her hope taking her blindly to an unknown spot as it takes me
Her mind released away her faction as it released mine before

But I'm still wondering?

When will this tantalizing journey stop?
Will my bad luck decided to drop?
When will this vision become real?
Will my secret fate suddenly reveal?

Only she knows how bad I feel
When her whisper reaches my ear
When her pretty face for my eyes is so clear
It's the best medicine for my soul to be healed

I run to you as fast as I can
"Never Give up" cause I'm your only man

I've missed you since I was born
All I thought they were were flowers
Wilted and faded they were
Filled of leaves with sharp thorns

I know you exist
I'm waiting for you
Please be there for me
Make my dreams come true... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 487 [topic] => 2 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 24 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Vision Of The Unknown

Contributed by OMEGA_ on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:20:27 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I feel her soft touch on my skin,
Her warm breath in my heart,
Her teasing whisper in my soul:
"I Exist Never Give Up or fall"

Her hope taking her blindly to an unknown spot as it takes me
Her mind released away her faction as it released mine before

But I'm still wondering?

When will this tantalizing journey stop?
Will my bad luck decided to drop?
When will this vision become real?
Will my secret fate suddenly reveal?

Only she knows how bad I feel
When her whisper reaches my ear
When her pretty face for my eyes is so clear
It's the best medicine for my soul to be healed

I run to you as fast as I can
"Never Give up" cause I'm your only man

I've missed you since I was born
All I thought they were were flowers
Wilted and faded they were
Filled of leaves with sharp thorns

I know you exist
I'm waiting for you
Please be there for me
Make my dreams come true...

Copyright © OMEGA_ ... [ 2004-04-22 06:20:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 06:27:55 AM AEST
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Touching poem. Aren't we all in search for that special someone that is a reflection and a supplement to perfect our souls?
Wonderful write.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:26:39 AM AEST
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incredible write
michelle

Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by OMEGA_ on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:10:56 AM AEST
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long time i always wanted to write that old vision that never left my mind..i'll appreciate your comments...

Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:28:00 AM AEST
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a very sweet and beautiful write.
i kinda agree with you the title doesnt go well. but i still like it alot.
very well written and just amazing.
keep up the awesome work, you have alot of talent.
Arden

Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:00:40 AM AEST
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Ah, very romantic and vaguely sensuous. A very enjoyable read.

Re: Vision Of The Unknown (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 05:20:01 AM AEST
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Now this one rocks and is very beautifull from the heart.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy
By the way u r a handsome young man.

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