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But that's all over now..
You left me here to bleed,
cold and alone,
damaged and broken.
You've spoken to me
with cruel words..
I find myself
at the end,
I've got to take my heart off of the shelf..
Pure sorrow my fled my heart
Because there was no answer
And now I'm trying to find a simple cure for the cancer..

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Bleed

Contributed by DamagedAndBroken on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:27:25 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You said you'd be there for me,
But that's all over now..
You left me here to bleed,
cold and alone,
damaged and broken.
You've spoken to me
with cruel words..
I find myself
at the end,
I've got to take my heart off of the shelf..
Pure sorrow my fled my heart
Because there was no answer
And now I'm trying to find a simple cure for the cancer..

Copyright © DamagedAndBroken ... [ 2004-04-22 16:27:25]
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Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 04:31:02 PM AEST
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if only the cure was simple, it's always screwy and complex and takes time to figure out... augh, oh well. hey ya, nearly forget - great write!! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by lonely_kakashi on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:01:04 PM AEST
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good write- dont think theres much else to say :)

:D
Kakashi

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:46:04 PM AEST
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What can I say it was brilliant :D

(V)ortis-Dark

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 05:52:48 PM AEST
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heartbreaking write I know these feelings well.
Michelle

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:50:07 AM AEST
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pain rising poem, but good all the same. i think we've all been left out in the cold and dark at some point of our lives, despite it being to do with, love, friendship, etc. we all know your pain.

i hope that you do find your answers.

from deathdrop.

Re: Bleed (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:09:14 PM AEST
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If only things were as easy as they seem. I hope things get better for you. I can relate but not to the full extent.. great job though.

darkangeleyes57

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