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And another ten thousand shall I take
My clan will grow strong
And this land we shall rule before every dawn
Blood we shall take
As bodies fall, and bones break
Hearts will be ripped out, as we walk through a red cloud
Ecstasy will be our fate, as we sink our teeth in for the take
Eyes will grow cold, and as black as night
Souls will be mine, as they are pulled from the light
Teeth and nails tare at the flesh
As we leave behind a bloody mess
Ten thousand souls I have claimed
And another ten thousand shall I take
People run through the streets, hoping that we never meet
Looking for places to hide
And praying to their God, to save their mortal lives
Sinking teeth, and ripping souls
To me is more precious than having gold
As I walk up to you just take my hand
For I promise to help you understand
What it is like to be part of my clan
You can not beat me, so don’t even try
And if you do, I’ll suck you dry, then leave your body here to die
Take my hand, and except this gift
For your life will have a higher lift
I am a master, and I can not be defeated
For I live a life that has been cheated
Ten thousand souls I have claimed
And another ten thousand shall I take
My clan will grow strong
And this land we shall rule before every dawn




2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith [comments] => 4 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Rylo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Ten Thousand Souls

Contributed by Rylo on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 09:51:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Ten thousand souls I have claimed
And another ten thousand shall I take
My clan will grow strong
And this land we shall rule before every dawn
Blood we shall take
As bodies fall, and bones break
Hearts will be ripped out, as we walk through a red cloud
Ecstasy will be our fate, as we sink our teeth in for the take
Eyes will grow cold, and as black as night
Souls will be mine, as they are pulled from the light
Teeth and nails tare at the flesh
As we leave behind a bloody mess
Ten thousand souls I have claimed
And another ten thousand shall I take
People run through the streets, hoping that we never meet
Looking for places to hide
And praying to their God, to save their mortal lives
Sinking teeth, and ripping souls
To me is more precious than having gold
As I walk up to you just take my hand
For I promise to help you understand
What it is like to be part of my clan
You can not beat me, so don’t even try
And if you do, I’ll suck you dry, then leave your body here to die
Take my hand, and except this gift
For your life will have a higher lift
I am a master, and I can not be defeated
For I live a life that has been cheated
Ten thousand souls I have claimed
And another ten thousand shall I take
My clan will grow strong
And this land we shall rule before every dawn




2004 Copyright BY: Ronald William Smith




Copyright © Rylo ... [ 2004-04-22 21:51:00]
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Re: Ten Thousand Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 10:10:15 PM AEST
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Dark! but damn good.


Re: Ten Thousand Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 11:08:57 PM AEST
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WoW Ron This Is Really Good.. I Like This :-)
Very Well Done ......
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************


Re: Ten Thousand Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:38:50 AM AEST
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Ron you do these so well they are so life like and give me chills burrrrrrrrrrr thanks!!!!!!!!!!
michelle


Re: Ten Thousand Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:45:21 AM AEST
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dam man that is some cool s*** i love it keep up the goood work




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