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he's got the face
of pretty waste
he sets my heart on fire
and it would be
that he's with me
if it were left up to desire

he's got the mind
and i'm robbed blind
he turns my skin to cream
and if it could
be like it should
he'd be with me, it'd seem

he's got the eyes
that i despise
they make my insides fly
but he can't see
i want us to be
and i'm left to cry

he's got the smile
that makes it worth while
i want to run and hide
this would be great
if left up to fate
he would be by my side

he's got the laugh
that drives me daft
he sets my soul on flames
why cant he see
what he means to me
he puts me to shame

he's got everything
he makes my heart sting
and he can't see it yet
but i want him so
it hurts to know
that he's the best i've met
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Pretty Waste

Contributed by heartpoison on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:01:43 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

PRETTY WASTE - 4/21/04
he's got the face
of pretty waste
he sets my heart on fire
and it would be
that he's with me
if it were left up to desire

he's got the mind
and i'm robbed blind
he turns my skin to cream
and if it could
be like it should
he'd be with me, it'd seem

he's got the eyes
that i despise
they make my insides fly
but he can't see
i want us to be
and i'm left to cry

he's got the smile
that makes it worth while
i want to run and hide
this would be great
if left up to fate
he would be by my side

he's got the laugh
that drives me daft
he sets my soul on flames
why cant he see
what he means to me
he puts me to shame

he's got everything
he makes my heart sting
and he can't see it yet
but i want him so
it hurts to know
that he's the best i've met

Copyright © heartpoison ... [ 2004-04-23 00:01:43]
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Re: Pretty Waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Mortis-Dark on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 12:19:49 AM AEST
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I feel that you have convoyed your emotions here well. Great write.

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Re: Pretty Waste (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:30:49 AM AEST
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I think the first stanza was incredible and it kept me reading. Nicely done. Very good use of words.

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