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I'm sure you won't open it
Though it screams at you

I tried to write what I felt
Though it comes out all wrong
I tried to write with a purpose
But to you there's not one at all

You won't write me back
Nothing unusual about that
You'll continue in silence
While you turn your back

I will compromise myself
And go back to you
Tap on your shoulder
And smile at you

You'll smile at me
And think that I've changed
Hoping things will be
Like old times the same

I'll seal this letter up
With my heart inside
Please take it out
And don't let it die
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Another letter to you

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:22:48 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Here's another letter I'm sending to you
I'm sure you won't open it
Though it screams at you

I tried to write what I felt
Though it comes out all wrong
I tried to write with a purpose
But to you there's not one at all

You won't write me back
Nothing unusual about that
You'll continue in silence
While you turn your back

I will compromise myself
And go back to you
Tap on your shoulder
And smile at you

You'll smile at me
And think that I've changed
Hoping things will be
Like old times the same

I'll seal this letter up
With my heart inside
Please take it out
And don't let it die

Copyright © the_story_of_the_year ... [ 2004-04-23 01:22:48]
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Re: Another letter to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Pompous on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:37:16 AM AEST
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awesome poem i love it
...Neal...

Re: Another letter to you (User Rating: 1 )
by Black13 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:07:10 AM AEST
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This was very nicely done. It doesn't tell the whole thing but keeps the reader interested. I enjoyed reading this one. It seemed so familiar to me. Thanks.

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