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Array ( [sid] => 44417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => WITH A RAY OF HOPE [time] => 2004-04-23 03:22:08 [hometext] => After attending to laborious, lengthy & risky Election duties and observing the innocent, faithful & most neglected MASS of the society I felt very bad of our system as a whole. [bodytext] => Food, Shelter and Clothing
basic needs for anybody
Sanitation,Medication and Education
essentials for everybody
always denied in Democracy
Alas, already 57 years old
independence yet not dependable
appears unsuitable
still sounds sustainable..hence
Poll not to become a fool
power to vote in hand
power in demand never end indeed
press the button
push the rotten
rulers not to ride and rude
leaders not to lead and hide
royal , loyal and real healers
act and react
at every time of need
accommodate, enrich and enlighten everyone in NATION

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 51 [informant] => ammalu [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Event )

WITH A RAY OF HOPE

Contributed by ammalu on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:22:08 AM in AEST
Topic: Event

Food, Shelter and Clothing
basic needs for anybody
Sanitation,Medication and Education
essentials for everybody
always denied in Democracy
Alas, already 57 years old
independence yet not dependable
appears unsuitable
still sounds sustainable..hence
Poll not to become a fool
power to vote in hand
power in demand never end indeed
press the button
push the rotten
rulers not to ride and rude
leaders not to lead and hide
royal , loyal and real healers
act and react
at every time of need
accommodate, enrich and enlighten everyone in NATION

Copyright © ammalu ... [ 2004-04-23 03:22:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: WITH A RAY OF HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:48:37 AM AEST
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Dearest lady, .you have done a great job..
with a ray of hope you have given good message...so poignant and beautiful verse with so much social consciousness..well done..keep it up..write more and more.
best wishes always:-) venkat

Re: WITH A RAY OF HOPE (User Rating: 1 )
by kalika_vidya on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:10:34 AM AEST
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What more can I say..I agree with my dad.

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