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Array ( [sid] => 4444 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Oh Blissful Insomnia [time] => 2002-09-30 07:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The cool practicality of the dark solitude

inside contrasts with the contusions of the

triggered sky and scene outside .

The adept competent watercolour artist

dragging his brush across the whole array

of pallid picturesque sheets

Something piquant is on the eve of its predestined arrival and there are the monotonous yet jarring people sounds.

Then this contrast is like a welt

and the cool regulated air inside is arid

and cold! Cold air in the tropics!A trifle disturbing and im perturbed as I stifle a nervousgrunt -psuedo cough that screens convulsive teeth chattering just marginally

Oh its frozen its friable and out of the sheer cold shackles and manacles I strut to the balcony.

Morning air is always palatablelike your preferred breakfast and it is a limpid blue

There is a huge tree directly opposite my balcony contentedly extending out like a matriach. Unidentified birds are arising gamely embracing the fortress of the tree

And all this whilst I lie with lacklustre on the antique bench my legs dangling like drenched strained washing finally eased all over slumped over the balcony railings like bristling nicely under the billowy breeze.

The orange light coming from the lamp light underneath the tree hither has been so obsequiously turned off

I smile.

And the monotony is being welded and it melds into the radical swatch of the brightening sky.

My dog consorting in frivolous engaging garden activity sees my legs dangling from the balcony and starts barking incessantly

In unecessarily niggling and compulsive tones .Extravagant I say .Im going to placate his frazzled nervesbefore he turns haggard.


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Oh Blissful Insomnia

Contributed by CARAAAAA on Monday, 30th September 2002 @ 07:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



The cool practicality of the dark solitude

inside contrasts with the contusions of the

triggered sky and scene outside .

The adept competent watercolour artist

dragging his brush across the whole array

of pallid picturesque sheets

Something piquant is on the eve of its predestined arrival and there are the monotonous yet jarring people sounds.

Then this contrast is like a welt

and the cool regulated air inside is arid

and cold! Cold air in the tropics!A trifle disturbing and im perturbed as I stifle a nervousgrunt -psuedo cough that screens convulsive teeth chattering just marginally

Oh its frozen its friable and out of the sheer cold shackles and manacles I strut to the balcony.

Morning air is always palatablelike your preferred breakfast and it is a limpid blue

There is a huge tree directly opposite my balcony contentedly extending out like a matriach. Unidentified birds are arising gamely embracing the fortress of the tree

And all this whilst I lie with lacklustre on the antique bench my legs dangling like drenched strained washing finally eased all over slumped over the balcony railings like bristling nicely under the billowy breeze.

The orange light coming from the lamp light underneath the tree hither has been so obsequiously turned off

I smile.

And the monotony is being welded and it melds into the radical swatch of the brightening sky.

My dog consorting in frivolous engaging garden activity sees my legs dangling from the balcony and starts barking incessantly

In unecessarily niggling and compulsive tones .Extravagant I say .Im going to placate his frazzled nervesbefore he turns haggard.






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Re: Oh Blissful Insomnia (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 07:39:39 AM AEST
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Ahaahaa I havent seen morning for a long time man....whats ur little dog doing in the garden? tsk tsk neighbors beware


Re: Oh Blissful Insomnia (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 07:40:37 AM AEST
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what the %#@? Why cant I loggin




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