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Mustard and relish, both combining
Lusting after, this tasty snack
Mouth watering, you try to hold back

Temptation is strong, head moves forward
Licking your lips, hot and bothered
Tongue touches the cheese, melting sensation
The burgers about to reach, it's destination

Mouth slips over, burger and bun
Slowly bite, a tender one
Got the taste, biting again
Taste on your tongue, drives you insane

Now you've finished, taken the lot
Beef, cheese and relish, left feeling hot
Wanting more of, taste buds delight
Mmm the cheeseburger, a beautiful sight
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The Cheeseburger

Contributed by parkman on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:24:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It sits in its bun, so inviting
Mustard and relish, both combining
Lusting after, this tasty snack
Mouth watering, you try to hold back

Temptation is strong, head moves forward
Licking your lips, hot and bothered
Tongue touches the cheese, melting sensation
The burgers about to reach, it's destination

Mouth slips over, burger and bun
Slowly bite, a tender one
Got the taste, biting again
Taste on your tongue, drives you insane

Now you've finished, taken the lot
Beef, cheese and relish, left feeling hot
Wanting more of, taste buds delight
Mmm the cheeseburger, a beautiful sight

Copyright © parkman ... [ 2004-04-23 13:24:08]
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Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 01:40:08 PM AEST
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a sensuous poem about a cheeseburger, lmao, im glad i just had lunch, very cute:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 02:10:34 PM AEST
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OMG, this is almost erotic. Even after all the haute cuisines I have eaten around the world, nothing incites my tastebuds like a hot juicy cheeseburger. The taste is almost orgasmic at times. Masterful write.

Rita

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by youlied on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 03:23:35 PM AEST
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This is funny, it sounds like me when I talk about food while hungry...mmm...Good poem.

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:37:00 PM AEST
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made me laugh lol good work

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by Juggalette_chick666pk on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 06:56:57 PM AEST
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when I first started reading I thought you were talking about somthing other than a CHEESEBURGER lol nice write though

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:12:35 PM AEST
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Good one. Almost made me run da door to get one. :-)

Whisper

Re: The Cheeseburger (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:13:01 PM AEST
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Good one. Almost made me run out da door to get one. :-)

Whisper

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