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[sid] => 44494
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => With her in my head
[time] => 2004-04-23 17:59:55
[hometext] => This Is A Dream Not A Poem. If you read this be sure to know it's very long. Analization is, pleased asked.
[bodytext] => My body shakes From the moment I awake _____________ They took her away But once a month She comes to make my day While all day I sleep My body shakes From the minute I awake _____________ Starts out A dream in a land so far away You know With friends you shouldn't have anyways First night back An old friend babysits for me While A rally up with the old Smoking reefer Getting stoned With theft and alcohol To push the bones After so Headed back to my son Driving...S***.... A policeman with a gun I get neverous but not enough to run She stays behind me with her lights off Until I run into a glass door Not shattering the door The door stops my car With red lights flashing I hope I have enough time To stash my score She recieve my name And runs it Asking me where I'm going And How did I miss seeing the door I replied I'm going over there on the other side of the door To pick up my boy My windows were fogged And I didn't have my defrost on While all this she ignored She had my name With no warrant aboard She says we've had some theft We're just wanting to be sure ___________ The next day running Around the same block I told certain people Of what happend For I knew the one they search for All day I looked for him Calling around searching everywhere Then finally close to dusk As I'm at a convienent store I see him walking I yell out his name He looks but continues on his way I run, I catch up to him In his hurried pace I try to talk to him but he keeps walking with his bag I relay the story of the night before Telling him the things That happend after I left his porch (His porch being a bar in a shopping center that is 1/4 of the location of the dream) I told him as we walked Then seeing an officer he hands me his bag I know what to do He takes off one way As I stroll Keeping an eye on the patrol The officer proceeds to take a left Unaware of what I had I cross the hiway Trying to keep an eye I witness the office make his u turn I duck in to an over hang on a bank I toss the bag into the garbage can And continue on my way To the closes restruant Once inside most of The residents knew me As some asked of the things they knew ___________ Then by one I got my a** chewed Now this one was different From all else of the dream This girl I couldn't even tell you her name She scolded me Telling me The friend (Crystal) who was babysitting for me Was to young for me (In the dream I was 19. That would of made her 16. Know in the real I've known Crystal Since I was 12) Well this girl hounded me And my only reply was I've known her for seven years I don't think I've ever Even tried to kiss her. But she continued Upon the attraction That I was unaware of. (This intersession felt like I was defending myself) Next thing's next I see a detective walking to the door I try to duck out the side But for some reason She didn't go in And we enter the side parking lot At the same time She walks to me As concoiusly I form My composure She tells me her name And hands me her card (the signifacants of the card?) The card was a clear plastic appearing only her name (the signifacants of the card?) We walked around the block Talking as she fished for revelations We parted as aquaintances Walking away strong Not knowing if we opposed Or stood together After that I hit the bar (my buddies porch) Ordered a beer And drink it with the slow sound Of Charlie Brown's teacher coming from the bartend Following that I walk back to the restraunt As I made it to the door There is a table outside Sitting 9TO5 people One of which I knew (she's not a 9to5 person) She had short blonde hair A white top on I got a smirk And I slightly raise my hand in acknowledgement She just smile like she didn't notice So I proceed inside to deal With my business Finally being able to talk to my buddy I tell him where his bag is I tell him what I know He tells me about last night How some of his buddies Tried to rob that bank Unfortunitly he states There was a roofing crew working there The cops where called but everyone got away Once we where thru With our conversation He gave to me Some trinkets I don't remember what the contents were (A poem, some small piece of paper, A pencil or something like that And a few more other items) I soon enter another conversation With an extra that just wanted to talk From the back room The door a sliver I hear "Put it in the a**" First thought MDMA (not that I would!) Well the extra and I continued to talk About nothing (In reference: I don't remember.) Some people emerged From the back room And making it to the door I see her So I grab the door in front of her hand And she looks at me With the biggest smile I look at her and say What you can't say hi? Just wave or show me You see me when I walk by What are talking about? She replied Outside, What You Didn't See Me When I Walked In. She says I've been in the back watching pornos Do you want to watch Just then I looked up and saw She smiled at me I smiled at her ____________ Then I awake My body it shakes ____________ I can't believe I snapped at her Never in the real such a thing happend ____________ It's been four years now But she visits me ____________ I believe she apart of me My angel watching me Sometimes I can hear her Soft songs in the winds Like she's singing to me Once again ____________ I feel her presence And think of her when I'm down ____________ She was always there To lift up my frown ____________ Hundreds of mile Days and months we would Find each other Over the mountains and across the plains We were one And I love the days When she finds me laid Across the bed etching thru dreams With her in my head These are the days I like to lay in bed Etching thru dreams With her in my head ____________ My soft angel Keeps me alive Even when I want to be dead ____________ She's my everything And I await to be with her ____________ It's been four years But I think and dream of Her everyday. 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