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Array ( [sid] => 44514 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => if i told you [time] => 2004-04-23 19:41:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I told u how I feel,
Would you tell me that its wrong,
If I told u I was hurting,
Would you tell me to be strong,
If I told you how it happened,
Would you tell me I’m to blame,
If I told you I felt stupid,
Would you think of me the same,
If I told u I was frightened,
Would you help me to my feet,
If I couldn’t walk alone,
Would you meet me in the street,
If I told you I was lost,
Would you show me the way,
If I told you life was dark,
Would you lead me to the day,
If I told you I needed you,
Would you leave me all alone,
If I told you I was lonely,
Would you bother to phone,
If I told you I felt used,
Would you think I was a whore,
If I came to you for help,
Would you turn and slam the door.

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if i told you

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:41:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

If I told u how I feel,
Would you tell me that its wrong,
If I told u I was hurting,
Would you tell me to be strong,
If I told you how it happened,
Would you tell me I’m to blame,
If I told you I felt stupid,
Would you think of me the same,
If I told u I was frightened,
Would you help me to my feet,
If I couldn’t walk alone,
Would you meet me in the street,
If I told you I was lost,
Would you show me the way,
If I told you life was dark,
Would you lead me to the day,
If I told you I needed you,
Would you leave me all alone,
If I told you I was lonely,
Would you bother to phone,
If I told you I felt used,
Would you think I was a whore,
If I came to you for help,
Would you turn and slam the door.

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Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:49:08 PM AEST
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so many sad questions. i can relate. i ask these questions every day...its very sad. brilliant write. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 07:49:30 PM AEST
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That was a awesome poem!! I have felt the same way many many days! Great write!! If you ever need someone to talk to PM me!

Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by sarah_may on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:04:50 PM AEST
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OMG, that is absolutly amazing! i love it! i write the same kinda poetry...cant manage to write anyhting happy ever...but jesus, that was just amazing i love it and i totally relate! keep up the great work, thats one of my favorites on this site! great job!!!

Sarah Mai
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Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:11:03 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good...Lot Of Sad Questions
Well Done...... Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
****************************

Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by spiffyphil on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:14:11 PM AEST
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this is my kind of poetry, good job.

Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:15:31 PM AEST
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I can relate
Good poem
~*xObeaOx*~

Re: if i told you (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:25:33 PM AEST
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good prose........well written......would you leave me all alone........i like that......

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