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Drowning

Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something that’s no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.

Drowning in a pool of Agony,
No one can help unless they can see.
This is the end of the rope,
Useless. Pointless. There is no more hope.

Drowning in a pool of Misery,
No one can hear, despite the plea.
Help, help, is the cry,
Life is over; time to die.

Drowning in a pool of Suffering,
The light above is disappearing.
All feeling is no more,
It’s time to go where angels soar.

Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something that’s no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.
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Drowning

Contributed by sarah_may on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:01:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Drowning

Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something that’s no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.

Drowning in a pool of Agony,
No one can help unless they can see.
This is the end of the rope,
Useless. Pointless. There is no more hope.

Drowning in a pool of Misery,
No one can hear, despite the plea.
Help, help, is the cry,
Life is over; time to die.

Drowning in a pool of Suffering,
The light above is disappearing.
All feeling is no more,
It’s time to go where angels soar.

Drowning in a pool of Despair,
Reaching for something that’s no longer there.
Slipping silently under the surface,
Realizing suddenly, nothing is worth this.

Copyright © sarah_may ... [ 2004-04-23 20:01:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:06:55 PM AEST
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Groovy flow. I pray for the best during your surgery.

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by sarah_may on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:08:24 PM AEST
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okay! ppl, i dont care if you dont like it, just leave SOMETHING! i havent posted ANY poetry since last year and ive been dying to share it with ppl so ANY review would be great because im in serious needing of feeling good rite now! - if ur gonna read it, PLEASE say something!:D

sarah mai

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by sarah_may on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:10:35 PM AEST
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thank you thank you thank you

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by hearmyvoice on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:16:35 PM AEST
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very nice poem! I hope all goes well!

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Brians_Sweety on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 08:30:20 PM AEST
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That was an awesome poem!! I hope that your surgery goes well. I will be praying for you. I would just like to let you know I also had a major surgery when I was 14 and I have lived to talk about it I am sure you will do the same

Stephanie

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by xoblondiebabix3 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:05:58 PM AEST
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I can really relate to what you're going through.. I luved this one it was AwEsOmE!!!!*:-)
HoPe ThINgs Go BeTtR fOr Ya EvEn ThO ThEy DiDnT rIlLY fOr mE..
LyL.
~*xObeaOx*~

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 09:07:08 PM AEST
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Sarah May...
U did great... awesome poem... all the best to u...
I'll be praying for u...

Break the surface and take a deep breath...
God's angels is watching over u...
Drown no more... but in His love for u...
~Donna~

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:40:02 PM AEST
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buenos suerte. excelente

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 1 )
by WorthlesSanity666 on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:09:06 PM AEST
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This is awsome... really powerful... and touching. I am only 13, and I can't imagine what it must be like. I pray all goes well in your surgery... you have a wonderful talent. I hope this poem was only a way to relieve anxiety... You got the point across beautifully!

Re: Drowning (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:24:56 PM AEST
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this is sweetz_48913@yahoo.com
ive been through almost everything you have wrote about if you want 2 talk e-mail me

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