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8 months togther 6 months apart.
Today I opened my old wounds.
In the end I hurt myself more than you could have ever had.

I wish I were with you.
Under a tree.
Amongst the sea.
Anywhere with you I would.

But to think you dont care.
Catches me breathlessly into a blank stare.
Have I put this upon myself.
Only to regain my shattered past.

I seek closure.
Never to find it soon.
In a game of hiding seek it seems.
Always hiding from me it is.
I wish closure would come.
And come soon it shall. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Mortis-Dark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Awaiting Closure

Contributed by Mortis-Dark on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 10:56:20 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

My angel faded long ago.
8 months togther 6 months apart.
Today I opened my old wounds.
In the end I hurt myself more than you could have ever had.

I wish I were with you.
Under a tree.
Amongst the sea.
Anywhere with you I would.

But to think you dont care.
Catches me breathlessly into a blank stare.
Have I put this upon myself.
Only to regain my shattered past.

I seek closure.
Never to find it soon.
In a game of hiding seek it seems.
Always hiding from me it is.
I wish closure would come.
And come soon it shall.

Copyright © Mortis-Dark ... [ 2004-04-23 22:56:20]
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Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:06:07 PM AEST
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Might just be because I'm emotional today, but I just cried my eyes out after reading that... that is so sad. I know the feeling to well. Im so sorry you still need a little closure, I hope you find it. Awesome write Mortis...

Lindsey

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:13:09 PM AEST
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This was so sad and very emotional.

I hope time will make things better for you.

This one touched my heart.

Kie

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:19:11 PM AEST
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very good...I too seek closure and it will never come for me. I hope it comes for you.

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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awww, this is so sad. i hope you find what you need soon. *hugs* phil xxx

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:44:41 PM AEST
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Sometimes closure is not good. That is because it takes away your reason for still having hope. When that door is finally shut there is not hope left. You think you are sad and empty now, just totally watch that door close and you will know empty. Hope things get better for you.

Rita

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by Letting_Go on Friday, 23rd April 2004 @ 11:53:06 PM AEST
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Closure is one of the hardest things to get. It's up there with trying to get rid of the pain. When you think that you may have closure it may not really be closure for you, something will trigger it off. I've been going for 3 years on trying to get closure and so many times I've let it slip through my hands, making myself suffer. Sometimes you think you want closure but really you dont and it hurts you more than enaything to go after it. Loved the poem by the way - "In the end I hurt my self more than you could have ever had." - You can say that again. Been in that situation way too many times. Get yourself outta it as soon as you can. Do it for yourself.

Re: Awaiting Closure (User Rating: 1 )
by eternallyloved on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 01:16:13 AM AEST
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Well written. Evokes emotion. Keep up the good work. God bless

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