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The Urgency Of Love's Defeat
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:26:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The inevitability of sorrow
The torture of regret
We live in a fiction of tomorrow
And you sink as you try to forget
Time will hold our intuitions
As we struggle to hold ourselves
Your drowning in your inhibitions
And I dream of no one else
Darkness covers our whispers
The clocks are breaking still
I guess clouds will shroud my life forever
At least you never will
The light that passes through us
The grass it tickles our feet
We run through tomorrow forever
The urgency of love's defeat
Submission beyond our motives
Letting go to what we feel
The sun will set as always
Close our eyes to what is real
Window panes surrounding
Crystal tides let be
The rain upon my eye lash
As I search for the forever-running-me
I know not what I search for
And I still have not found you
Perhaps as time grows upon us
Our pathes will cross as they always do
Smiles fade to heaven
The shadows disappear
I'm letting go of all your hatred
And things that fall apart, let go of all my fear
One day belief will strike you
As the urgency of now descends
Your smile will forever haunt me
As the cycle of my passion never ends...
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Re: The Urgency Of Love's Defeat
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by veruca on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:35:37 AM AEST
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Very strong and Powerful!!!! I loved it a lot...you have a very nice style.....
kiss kiss,
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Re: The Urgency Of Love's Defeat
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by bluoreo on
Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 02:56:59 AM AEST
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I think that this was really good. YOu are quite talented.
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Re: The Urgency Of Love's Defeat
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 10:15:14 AM AEST
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| been there. liked this. |
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Re: The Urgency Of Love's Defeat
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 11:31:47 AM AEST
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| A hint of the spirtual mixed with pain and despair. |
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