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Array ( [sid] => 44571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => winter's woes [time] => 2004-04-24 05:34:21 [hometext] => [bodytext] => winter's woes

fall gave way to winter
ardent red colors were replaced
by glistening white snow
the moon so demure retreats
to her cloudy castle
sometimes she peeks out
proclaiming her moonstone glory
naked trees bare their souls to
silver stars so cold
Demeter laments over Peresphone
ravens so audacious murmur
superstitions
snowflakes dance around in
rapture
still none could ever capture them
lingering memories of years past
try to overcome frozen isolation
long ago faerytales written on
dusty parchment
are read by silly dreamers
intoxicated by enchanted
fantasies

season is to season:
winter gives way to spring
glistening white snow
is now replaced by
warm sunshine
and flowery breezes.
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winter's woes

Contributed by crystalnebulina on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:34:21 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

winter's woes

fall gave way to winter
ardent red colors were replaced
by glistening white snow
the moon so demure retreats
to her cloudy castle
sometimes she peeks out
proclaiming her moonstone glory
naked trees bare their souls to
silver stars so cold
Demeter laments over Peresphone
ravens so audacious murmur
superstitions
snowflakes dance around in
rapture
still none could ever capture them
lingering memories of years past
try to overcome frozen isolation
long ago faerytales written on
dusty parchment
are read by silly dreamers
intoxicated by enchanted
fantasies

season is to season:
winter gives way to spring
glistening white snow
is now replaced by
warm sunshine
and flowery breezes.

Copyright © crystalnebulina ... [ 2004-04-24 05:34:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: winter's woes (User Rating: 1 )
by mountainhigh on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 05:50:34 AM AEST
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But I like the magic of the cold crisp air, and the promise of what lies underneath that pure white blanket of snow.

This is a beautiful poem, I see I will have another favorite to read .

Thanks for sharing.

Re: winter's woes (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Saturday, 24th April 2004 @ 06:18:34 AM AEST
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Ooh..very very beautiful..lovely painting of nature..I agree with the comment of mountainhigh..welcome to y.p.d.c..best of luck. venkat

Re: winter's woes (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:55:03 AM AEST
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Very beautifull pictures you've painted in this write.
Great job.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: winter's woes (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 05:13:50 AM AEST
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Lovely poem :) Lots of descriptive phrases you can almost see the colors and feel the coldL ..great job crystal:)

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