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[aid] => mick
[title] => Ode to Sun
[time] => 2004-04-24 07:34:24
[hometext] => As the name suggests, this is an ode to the sun, though not what you might expect. Well, I thought it was pretty good when I wrote it, I hope you like it and please, as always, I'm hungry for any form of feedback, good/bad or other wise.
[bodytext] => Sweet lifeblood of the land Prosper all of might and bland Send unto untimely death Ode to you, lest forget Shimmering rays adorn the dawn Bright new future, drawn for all Dark depression chased away Cheery thoughts, clouded mind See not what’s there, Just what’s left behind Truth reviled, vanity concealed Love suppressed, the sun to bless True at heart and minds of men Blessed light, hide the dark The shadows deep, the night unchanging What’s true to us, darkness bright Let sun come back for us to hide. [comments] => 0 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 64 [informant] => ripshark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )
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