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Array ( [sid] => 44715 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => beauty [time] => 2004-04-25 07:18:31 [hometext] => This is a poem written to my ex-gf who I am very close with. She is and always will be my best friend and true love in a sense. She is going away for a few months and we are both busy so I am just writing her a letter with this poem. [bodytext] => Like star light star bright
she shines brighter then the brightest light
among the moons
a ring
and mars
she'll dazzle high
low
yet not to far

confused you reach for your telescope
reach your arm
see this brightest light

You find yourself
looking now
high and low
confused you are hit
this light has a record of
not a single miss
but many a hit


Now this one eye has promise
he adjusts and adjusts
tries so desperately to focus
to focus he tries
and in this
he does realize
the light comes not from the skies
but from the beauty of her eyes



with love

raffy


Have an awesome trip
Your always my fav n closest 2 my heart
even when reality hits
and it seems you couldn't be further. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Scrunchie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
beauty

Contributed by Scrunchie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:18:31 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Like star light star bright
she shines brighter then the brightest light
among the moons
a ring
and mars
she'll dazzle high
low
yet not to far

confused you reach for your telescope
reach your arm
see this brightest light

You find yourself
looking now
high and low
confused you are hit
this light has a record of
not a single miss
but many a hit


Now this one eye has promise
he adjusts and adjusts
tries so desperately to focus
to focus he tries
and in this
he does realize
the light comes not from the skies
but from the beauty of her eyes



with love

raffy


Have an awesome trip
Your always my fav n closest 2 my heart
even when reality hits
and it seems you couldn't be further.




Copyright © Scrunchie ... [ 2004-04-25 07:18:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:23:07 AM AEST
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Well written , I enjoyed it very much.




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