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Array ( [sid] => 44742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Why [time] => 2004-04-25 12:42:50 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after my first boyfriend of two months dumped me for my best friend things between me haven't be the same since [bodytext] => I wish things were the same
When I had you and you had me
buts things will never be the same
so why even try
this life is so confusing
why can't things be same...i know why cuz you don't love me ne more
I'll move on, tho I will never forget you
You were first and I wish you were my last
but that will never be so why even try
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Why

Contributed by farmtowngirl on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 12:42:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I wish things were the same
When I had you and you had me
buts things will never be the same
so why even try
this life is so confusing
why can't things be same...i know why cuz you don't love me ne more
I'll move on, tho I will never forget you
You were first and I wish you were my last
but that will never be so why even try

Copyright © farmtowngirl ... [ 2004-04-25 12:42:50]
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Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 01:13:06 PM AEST
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Oy, hon, firsts rarely are lasts.....
Thinks will look up. My first love has faded since then (which is surprising, it's only been a year).
But I never had his love in return, so I can't speak fully for you.
But I do know that time slowly wears away at hurts, til you can't feel their sting anymore....
If that makes any sense =)

Love,
Ellen

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:09:41 PM AEST
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Hello and a warm welcome to YPDC.

I thought you expressed your emotion well in this poem. There were some minor spelling errors but other than that I thought it was a good poem.

Enjoyed it.

Kie

Re: Why (User Rating: 1 )
by chris3btine77 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 04:13:10 PM AEST
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Nice write....but truly if this boy left you for your best friend then you are better off

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