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Array ( [sid] => 44763 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Depression [time] => 2004-04-25 15:05:50 [hometext] => again, not much to say. [bodytext] => As we talk, my heart melts,
as we walk, my hands shake,
all you do is make me ache,
My heart yerns to be at your side,
to comfort you through the bad,
to be happy with you in the good,
my heart yerns to be next to you,
my body quivers when im near you,
my soul rejoices when im around you,
you make me feel so alive.

Yet when i see you swept in depression,
I can not do a thing to help you,
All i can do is be there for you,
Tell you how great you are,
tell you how much you mean to me,
To say you are never alone,
I to have been down this path,
the things you are going through,
i've been there too,
Depression, I feel it now,
Sucking my heart into its deep void,
Never ending sadness,
yet i fight with all my might,
to bring us both out of this plite.

I dont care about whats gone before,
whats done can be undone no more,
all we can do is go on,
onwards i want to go,
with you by my side,
happy and contented,
no more sadness,
no more depression,
just us in our bubble,
together forever.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 61 [informant] => lonely_kakashi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Your Depression

Contributed by lonely_kakashi on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:05:50 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



As we talk, my heart melts,
as we walk, my hands shake,
all you do is make me ache,
My heart yerns to be at your side,
to comfort you through the bad,
to be happy with you in the good,
my heart yerns to be next to you,
my body quivers when im near you,
my soul rejoices when im around you,
you make me feel so alive.

Yet when i see you swept in depression,
I can not do a thing to help you,
All i can do is be there for you,
Tell you how great you are,
tell you how much you mean to me,
To say you are never alone,
I to have been down this path,
the things you are going through,
i've been there too,
Depression, I feel it now,
Sucking my heart into its deep void,
Never ending sadness,
yet i fight with all my might,
to bring us both out of this plite.

I dont care about whats gone before,
whats done can be undone no more,
all we can do is go on,
onwards i want to go,
with you by my side,
happy and contented,
no more sadness,
no more depression,
just us in our bubble,
together forever.




Copyright © lonely_kakashi ... [ 2004-04-25 15:05:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Your Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 03:32:25 PM AEST
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This was so tender and deeply loving. I could feel the love in this poem and wanting to help. I just adored this one and it really touched me.

I can't praise this one high enough.

Kie


Re: Your Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:41:37 AM AEST
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Kie is right for once you reached my heart. i know what your trying to say to me, but i have no way of seeing my path out just yet i need to find it myself rather than being shown. as always i know your help is there and im grateful.

hugs
XgenX




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