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Array ( [sid] => 44806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => _~_ Observation Deck _~_ [time] => 2004-04-25 18:59:14 [hometext] => I went out to the beach today and took my writing book with me. Just in case something inspired me. [bodytext] => Standing on the
observation deck,
cool breeze blows
through my hair,
whilst I look
out over the ocean.

The waves wash up
along the desolate beach,
I see a fishing boat
heading out to check
the traps......
checking to see
what the fisher has
for today's catch.

The wind picks up
it gets cold,
the eyes get watery,
time to turn around
and go.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.25/2004 [comments] => 9 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 54 [informant] => Cynthia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

_~_ Observation Deck _~_

Contributed by Cynthia on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 06:59:14 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

Standing on the
observation deck,
cool breeze blows
through my hair,
whilst I look
out over the ocean.

The waves wash up
along the desolate beach,
I see a fishing boat
heading out to check
the traps......
checking to see
what the fisher has
for today's catch.

The wind picks up
it gets cold,
the eyes get watery,
time to turn around
and go.

Copyright Cynthia Jones
Apr.25/2004

Copyright © Cynthia ... [ 2004-04-25 18:59:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:09:08 PM AEST
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When I lived on the coast I would catch one of the ferrys and go up top to watch the dolphins race with the ferry and see the gulls as we would put into harbor on each side. All the seaside birds are amazing. Such hardy creatures. The harbor restaurants aren't bad either. (I must be hungry, lol)

Rita

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:13:38 PM AEST
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COOL READ ABOUT A DAY ON THE BEACH!
CAN'T WAIT TO TAKE A DAY OFF AT THE BEACH!!
LOL-DAN!!!

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:39:03 PM AEST
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ENVY! I wanted to be there. You brought this to life in your poem.

Very well done.

Kie

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 07:39:36 PM AEST
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beautiful imagery just lovely.
wonderful work.
Arden

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 09:53:55 PM AEST
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Beautifully done,Loved this! Christina

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:52:04 AM AEST
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mmmm..good imagery..well done.venkat

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:20:53 AM AEST
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Wonderful imagery... I love to go out sailing as well.
Greetz,
Hur

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 05:32:01 PM AEST
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ahh cynthia, dreamy and sounds like a lovely place to write your beautiful poetry:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-

Re: _~_ Observation Deck _~_ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:25:11 PM AEST
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Sounds like everyday on good old Okinawa.

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