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Drops of crimson sparkling in the light

A sadistic smile and evil in his eyes
Anticipation of pain, torture, and lies

Licking his lips when he hears the screams
Destroying their souls, shattering their dreams

Feeling the wind that howls in the dark
Searching in the shadows, looking for his mark

A pretty blonde walking down the hill
His eyes gleam as he goes in for the kill

Her lifeless body falls to the ground
While he slips away without a sound

In the darkness he awaits
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In The Darkness He Awaits

Contributed by JadedExistence on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:20:38 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Silver blade glistening in the night
Drops of crimson sparkling in the light

A sadistic smile and evil in his eyes
Anticipation of pain, torture, and lies

Licking his lips when he hears the screams
Destroying their souls, shattering their dreams

Feeling the wind that howls in the dark
Searching in the shadows, looking for his mark

A pretty blonde walking down the hill
His eyes gleam as he goes in for the kill

Her lifeless body falls to the ground
While he slips away without a sound

In the darkness he awaits
To bring more into the hell he creates

Copyright © JadedExistence ... [ 2004-04-26 00:20:38]
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Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by Rylo on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:39:14 AM AEST
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This was really hot, I loved every word of it very dark. Great job.

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by blondie_64865 on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:12:10 AM AEST
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your poem has alot to say about the dark side which stands so very true in these times. very good poem!

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:22:56 AM AEST
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excellent poem, i think i met this guy once, hugs n' love nessa

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 01:53:32 AM AEST
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this is grerat, no, it's better than great!

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 08:33:13 AM AEST
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WOW..... wow...
i LOVE this!
so dark and chilling and just plane creepy.
the flow was perfect the writing was outstanding. wonderful work.
again i love this.
Arden

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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deliciously lovely......excellent write.......

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 06:41:04 PM AEST
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Jaded, this is a perfect piece. I am enjoying writing dark poems myself. I'll be reading more of yours. *S* Cynthia

Re: In The Darkness He Awaits (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 10:18:01 PM AEST
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Wow, this inspires me to write more dark poetry. Great write. Loved every word of it. :)

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