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Just wasting away
And further in my mind
Are all the games we played
The pain that I felt
And the tears that rolled free
Never asking for help
The times you hit me.
I couldn’t walk away
No matter how much I tried
With you is where I stayed
But you never were really mine.
Three years of this hell
Why couldn’t I see
So many times I had fell
It wasn’t meant to be.
The bruises on my face
On my legs and on my arms
Feeling such disgrace
You caused so much harm.
And now I walk away
Leaving you behind
Not listening to what you say
Taking back what’s always been mine.
And I show you my hand
But with only one finger
***** the years we had
The pain will always linger. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 235 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CuttersAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Sifting Through The Ashes

Contributed by CuttersAngel on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:04:50 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Sifting through the ashes
Just wasting away
And further in my mind
Are all the games we played
The pain that I felt
And the tears that rolled free
Never asking for help
The times you hit me.
I couldn’t walk away
No matter how much I tried
With you is where I stayed
But you never were really mine.
Three years of this hell
Why couldn’t I see
So many times I had fell
It wasn’t meant to be.
The bruises on my face
On my legs and on my arms
Feeling such disgrace
You caused so much harm.
And now I walk away
Leaving you behind
Not listening to what you say
Taking back what’s always been mine.
And I show you my hand
But with only one finger
***** the years we had
The pain will always linger.

Copyright © CuttersAngel ... [ 2004-04-27 00:04:50]
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Re: Sifting Through The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by Chanti on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:23:49 AM AEST
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Very talented Anyone who would cause you such pain, isnt worthy of such beautiful poetry

-Chanti *

Re: Sifting Through The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 12:32:07 AM AEST
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LOVE IT!!! You couldn't have ended it any better. Good for you for having the strength to walk away and let go, even if the pain stays. You're a step ahead of most people already, myself included. Awesome write!!

~ Moonlit

Re: Sifting Through The Ashes (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:50:23 PM AEST
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Groovy to the max!!! I really like this. The hatred is feels so raw and deep. And the flow, oh such a nice flow. Excellent piece.

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