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Array ( [sid] => 45013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See-Through Man [time] => 2004-04-27 02:29:53 [hometext] => This a personal view of the Sunday morning ministers you see on TV or hell, it can be towards anyone who thinks they are above you. [bodytext] => Look at this guy
With his head held high
Doesn't he see?
That no one believes

His walk and talk
His laugh or smile
His claim to fame
He's just in denial

This man is as average as you or I
Yet he builds himself on all these lies
He really believes he's this false idol
But you know what? Let him have his title

Because he'll never see who he trully is
And all his falsehood and lies are amiss
But the fact will always remain at hand
This guy is a... see-through man [comments] => 2 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 11 [informant] => lostinlimbo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )

See-Through Man

Contributed by lostinlimbo on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 02:29:53 AM in AEST
Topic: ChristianPoetry

Look at this guy
With his head held high
Doesn't he see?
That no one believes

His walk and talk
His laugh or smile
His claim to fame
He's just in denial

This man is as average as you or I
Yet he builds himself on all these lies
He really believes he's this false idol
But you know what? Let him have his title

Because he'll never see who he trully is
And all his falsehood and lies are amiss
But the fact will always remain at hand
This guy is a... see-through man

Copyright © lostinlimbo ... [ 2004-04-27 02:29:53]
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Re: See-Through Man (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 03:36:37 AM AEST
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Wow you must of had some kind of hate towards sunday preachers.Ok i do agree with you on some of those guys but not all are like that.Oh by the way good write.

Re: See-Through Man (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:25:32 AM AEST
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I agree but I probably wouldn't have been as nice as u. Years ago I use to watch this preacher till he looked thru the screen and said, "Now if u do eactly what I tell u then u will go to heave." It was then I said don't think so. I look to God for my help not men.
Very good write.
peace, joy, luv,
emy

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