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Blue Star
Contributed by
MysticFireFairy
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 04:13:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cold and Dark a flower stays
but will the flower live another day?
Cold and Dark a flower stays
and hope it wont wither away.
From light to dark
From dark to light
never will the flower lark
always will stay in sight.
The flower reaches toward the sky
it never withers always standing high.
The flower hides it darkest fear
never once it sheds a tear.
The blue star in the sky
never will its beauty lie.
Copyright ©
MysticFireFairy
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2004-04-27 16:13:58]
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Re: Blue Star
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:02:27 PM AEST
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I thought your poem was lovely.
And excellent to boot.
Kie |
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Re: Blue Star
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:12:12 PM AEST
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Very beautiful writing to be so depressed... I loved ur poem... it's a bit sad but beautiful at the same time...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Blue Star
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by JadedExistence on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:32:41 PM AEST
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Great write. I love it. It flows really well and the wording is perfect. Keep it up.
~JadedExistence~ |
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Re: Blue Star
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 09:18:45 AM AEST
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| this is lovely!! excellent style here:) hugs n' love nessa |
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