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[aid] => mick
[title] => rainie roo
[time] => 2004-04-28 02:01:38
[hometext] => about a very real beautiful little girl
[bodytext] =>
the room was rather dull; then in came
the sunshine
and along with it her laughter,
it sounded so sublime,
a most beautiful child, she was almost two
she ran to and fro;
she had so much to do,
her shoe came undone, her daddy had much fun,
trying to get rainie to sit,
at last the squirming she quit,
when i asked her her name,
she said wainie woo,
i looked at her mother,
and then to her father; who
was picking up pieces of his cell phone,
and i had to laugh because i'm sure
she was more the character at home!
i said what a pretty name and
beautiful young lady you are,
and gave her my keychain bear-
which straightaway flew in the air,
i asked if that was truly her name, it was so lovely
her with her little fru-frus in her hair
her mother answered a quick yes,
oh, this child was such a beauty faire!
her father cleaned up a paper mess,
there was hardly time to talk;
little girl holding the room captive,
not a teeny minute did she stop moving,
for little rainie roo was quite active!
,-._,-.
/)"(/
(_o_)
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[counter] => 335
[topic] => 5
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[acomm] => 0
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[score] => 89
[ratings] => 18
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => ChildrensPoetry
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rainie roo
Contributed by
ladyfawn
on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:01:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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the room was rather dull; then in came
the sunshine
and along with it her laughter,
it sounded so sublime,
a most beautiful child, she was almost two
she ran to and fro;
she had so much to do,
her shoe came undone, her daddy had much fun,
trying to get rainie to sit,
at last the squirming she quit,
when i asked her her name,
she said wainie woo,
i looked at her mother,
and then to her father; who
was picking up pieces of his cell phone,
and i had to laugh because i'm sure
she was more the character at home!
i said what a pretty name and
beautiful young lady you are,
and gave her my keychain bear-
which straightaway flew in the air,
i asked if that was truly her name, it was so lovely
her with her little fru-frus in her hair
her mother answered a quick yes,
oh, this child was such a beauty faire!
her father cleaned up a paper mess,
there was hardly time to talk;
little girl holding the room captive,
not a teeny minute did she stop moving,
for little rainie roo was quite active!
,-._,-.
/)"(/
(_o_)
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Re: rainie roo
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:06:59 AM AEST
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Beautifull write for a beautifull girl.
luv, huggs,
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Re: rainie roo
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:08:32 AM AEST
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this is nice, i like the line
her with her little fru-frus in her hair
her mother answered a quick yes,
oh, this child was such a beauty faire!
Good job.
- Stacy |
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Re: rainie roo
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:10:25 AM AEST
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A delightful picture and a wonderful poem. All babies are beautiful.
bernard |
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Re: rainie roo
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:38:47 AM AEST
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| sooo sweet..very delightful excellent poem..superbly beautiful.. :-) venkat |
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Re: rainie roo
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by AnGeL_M on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 02:46:31 AM AEST
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This Is Absolutely Beautiful !!!!!!! Love It
Keep Em Coming :-)
******LoVe**AnGeL*******
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Re: rainie roo
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by spooky on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 03:30:53 AM AEST
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children are the most pecious people on earth,
we enjoy the things they do, even what they say, beautifully written,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 08:24:36 AM AEST
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Awww she sounds like a doll and what a beautiful name. You brought a huge smile to me this morning with this poem.
I adore it.
Kie |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Cynthia on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:27:28 AM AEST
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| Awwwwwww, Nessa, this was wonderful. It was such a delight to read. What a cute poem. Hehehe *S* Cynthia |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Bongo on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:06:12 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhh perfection.........
Childrens poetry attracts attention
A step in a healthy direction
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Re: rainie roo
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:12:23 AM AEST
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All children are beautiful treasures. They hold the hope inside them for our world to continue. I always wanted a little girl but was so blessed with boys. Even all the grandchildren are boys. Probably best as that is all I know about. I drowned in testosterone many years ago!!!!!!! lol
Hugs,
Rita |
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by forever_lonely on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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i Want a 'wainie woo' lol
This is so adorable, i could ramble n for dys about this which no doubt i will to my friends, everything about this write was perfect, imagery was cataclysmic but i have to expect nothing less from you nessa a true joy to read
Luke |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:26:48 PM AEST
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Awww hun this is so beautiful and so cute. Beautifully written and worth the time of every person who read it :D
Big Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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Re: rainie roo
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by OMEGA_ on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 06:40:17 PM AEST
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have nothing to say...
Amazing
very lovely
well done |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Merry on
Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:56:51 PM AEST
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how sweet - nothing like a little one to remind us of how truly sweet and precious life is - enjoyed this one so much nessa - you really set the scene perfectly
hugs
merry |
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Re: rainie roo
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:38:50 AM AEST
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So Sweet, Nessa. She sounds like a peach! Man, this made me smile so big! I loved it!
Lindsey |
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Re: rainie roo
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by arden on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:12:53 AM AEST
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awwww this made my heart melt. it made me think of the kids i nanny for. i loved this. it was just so amazing and sweet.
im at a loss for words.
just loved it.
Arden |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 11:48:12 PM AEST
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Cute little poem that makes me laugh every other stanza. I always look at your titles and wonder what they mean, once I really get into it and read the poem I understand and I love the way you make me wonder. NEVER STOP!!!
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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Re: rainie roo
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 03:04:32 PM AEST
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What an adorable cure and unique poem
Wondrous piece of poetry
Love Sweetangelukxxxx |
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Re: rainie roo
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:02:34 PM AEST
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| Children often capture our attention in this way and you have captured my thoughts witha well written poem. |
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