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Array ( [sid] => 45413 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Depression Takes Over [time] => 2004-04-29 14:48:04 [hometext] => I really felt like doing this when he left me. [bodytext] => I feel like a piece of trash,
Something that has been passed around.
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground.

My heart is so broken,
I don't know what to do.
Please don't forget
I will always love you.

I can't go on
Living this life.
I have no choice
But to pick up the knife.

I know this will cause
Some people pain.
But I feel so empty
I could go insane.

I loved you so much
and that's no lie.
But I give up
and I want to die.

I wish you were here,
To hold me near.
I pick up the gun,
and I fall to the floor.

I guess this is where
Everything has to end.
You were a great guy,
and a wonderful friend. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 22 [informant] => tiny_mo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Depression Takes Over

Contributed by tiny_mo on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I feel like a piece of trash,
Something that has been passed around.
I want to jump off a building
and crash into the ground.

My heart is so broken,
I don't know what to do.
Please don't forget
I will always love you.

I can't go on
Living this life.
I have no choice
But to pick up the knife.

I know this will cause
Some people pain.
But I feel so empty
I could go insane.

I loved you so much
and that's no lie.
But I give up
and I want to die.

I wish you were here,
To hold me near.
I pick up the gun,
and I fall to the floor.

I guess this is where
Everything has to end.
You were a great guy,
and a wonderful friend.

Copyright © tiny_mo ... [ 2004-04-29 14:48:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by sugar0986 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 02:51:05 PM AEST
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Good poem. I'm sorry that you feel like this.

~Brittany~

Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Hyper on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:05:27 PM AEST
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sorry for your pain, i hope you're doing well now. nice work...
-hype-

Re: Depression Takes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 27th July 2004 @ 02:53:24 PM AEST
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NIcely written...but no man is worth taking your life for...... (sorry if this seems harsh)
Jenni

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