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Array ( [sid] => 45419 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Death Because of You [time] => 2004-04-29 15:35:26 [hometext] => I have never tried to kill myself over someone. and i never will. this is just what i felt like when i knew the things between us were over. [bodytext] => I try to cover the scars
but its very hard
I shake hands
and they just stare
and start to back away
like I've come down with a plague
I've lost all my friends
my parents pretend I'm not here
I pass people in the halls
they dare not get near me like its a law
I sit in my room
and remember the day
the day I made my desiscion
that was a terrible day
I still remember the feeling
the feeling of the razor to my wrists
for a good second it felt good
felt like I was getting away
getting away from all the pain
the pain you gave me that day
you came and told me you've found someone new
and that the things between us weren't true
how could you
but how could I let myself think
that it would be good to slit my wrists
just because of what you said to me

so now I lay in my bed
with a gun to my head
this time I won't make a mistake
this chance I must take
I gently pull the trigger back
and wish to say
" I hope you know
what I did today." [comments] => 4 [counter] => 151 [topic] => 52 [informant] => pyrochick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Death Because of You

Contributed by pyrochick on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:35:26 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



I try to cover the scars
but its very hard
I shake hands
and they just stare
and start to back away
like I've come down with a plague
I've lost all my friends
my parents pretend I'm not here
I pass people in the halls
they dare not get near me like its a law
I sit in my room
and remember the day
the day I made my desiscion
that was a terrible day
I still remember the feeling
the feeling of the razor to my wrists
for a good second it felt good
felt like I was getting away
getting away from all the pain
the pain you gave me that day
you came and told me you've found someone new
and that the things between us weren't true
how could you
but how could I let myself think
that it would be good to slit my wrists
just because of what you said to me

so now I lay in my bed
with a gun to my head
this time I won't make a mistake
this chance I must take
I gently pull the trigger back
and wish to say
" I hope you know
what I did today."




Copyright © pyrochick ... [ 2004-04-29 15:35:26]
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Re: Death Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 04:16:53 PM AEST
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Man.. this person is really bummed out... I can relate... but I was never depressed over someone to want to kill myself... mine was a depression of a different kind...
Good poem... well hought out... well written...
thank you for sharing.
~Donna~


Re: Death Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by tropicalheattt on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:09:15 PM AEST
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this poem is very strong but its gud.


Re: Death Because of You (User Rating: 1 )
by tropicalheattt on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 06:10:18 PM AEST
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this poem is very strong but its gud.


Re: Death Because of You (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:07:08 PM AEST
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i can really feel what your saying i have gone threw it and im really touched by this poem. This is a very expressing poem that i can see myself writing i loved it - TJ MAX




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