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Hardly I resist that magical attraction from her body
The desire of moving my hands over her soft skin or over her hair

She might be many meters away from me
But for my eyes she is all I can see
And for my heart she exists and always will be

I have so much to tell her, So much to say
But I don't know if she will care for me this way

For someone like me full of wounds from the past
All that is not enough to make me risk
Hurting my bleeding heart again or what still lasts

Without a real clear sign it will be so hard
Without a simple hope I won't be able to start
Cause this time I won't let my heart again tearing apart

So what if also all her behaves inverse what I feel
Careless and ignoring
Instead of insinuations wheel
Which for me is the sweetest prove
And the safest seal

So how could I believe that her love is real? [comments] => 10 [counter] => 560 [topic] => 55 [informant] => OMEGA_ [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 8 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

So How Could I...

Contributed by OMEGA_ on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 08:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Madly I do like her
Hardly I resist that magical attraction from her body
The desire of moving my hands over her soft skin or over her hair

She might be many meters away from me
But for my eyes she is all I can see
And for my heart she exists and always will be

I have so much to tell her, So much to say
But I don't know if she will care for me this way

For someone like me full of wounds from the past
All that is not enough to make me risk
Hurting my bleeding heart again or what still lasts

Without a real clear sign it will be so hard
Without a simple hope I won't be able to start
Cause this time I won't let my heart again tearing apart

So what if also all her behaves inverse what I feel
Careless and ignoring
Instead of insinuations wheel
Which for me is the sweetest prove
And the safest seal

So how could I believe that her love is real?

Copyright © OMEGA_ ... [ 2004-04-29 20:49:16]
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Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:47:45 PM AEST
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Another good write, my friend.
Thanks for your comments on my work. I enjoy your work too.
Think I need to catch up tho.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by AnGeL_M on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:10:31 PM AEST
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This Is Really Good !!!!!!!!!!! I Liked It
Keep Em Coming......
*******LoVe**AnGeL********
******************************

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:12:52 PM AEST
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Awwww thais so sweet.
If you are really in love with this person you should let her know that you like her.
I know your afraid of being hurt but hey we all take chances ,even though we might get hurt in the long run.great poem.keep writing.
by the way thanks on the comment you made on my poem. Good luck. :)

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 10:50:32 PM AEST
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sometimes i wonder how my heart still beats, then i see something beautiful like your poem and i know why, tis love, i think the world of your expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->-

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by arden on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 09:00:26 AM AEST
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a beautiful poem my friend.
written wonderfully.
amazing.
well done.
Arden

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 04:37:34 PM AEST
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Another beautiful poem OMEGA. This was sweetly peaceful with a little bit of wonder once it unfolded. I love your style. :) Great poem.

Lindsey

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:33:17 AM AEST
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awww this is really pretty i wish someone would write a poem like this about me ... :) im sure she will like it... she probably doesnt even know that you feel that way about her... you have to tell her and then youll get the truth :) :) :)

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 05:46:30 PM AEST
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This is really beautifully written. Loved it..
Welcome to ypdc..
Jenni

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by Socke on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 02:00:43 PM AEST
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I love to read ur poems, cuz it showes me a part of ur soul....something deep, clear and in away inocent and v pure...u write from ur heart and that's really wonderful
just go on with it and let other people feel the emotions with u
great work

Lisbeth

Re: So How Could I... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:28:15 AM AEST
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You are very talented..
Your poetry gives me butterflys

x

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