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Array ( [sid] => 45478 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Hatred, My Epiphany [time] => 2004-04-29 21:07:15 [hometext] => What if you were the same as your enemy? [bodytext] => My Hatred, My Epiphany

Most of my feelings
Are cut short
I'm advised
And I get angered
Without reprise

I hate my life
I hate everything
And I can't get away
From it all, at all
And I wish that I didn't feel
Surrounded by oppression
Feeling aggression
And wanting to hurt others
For the sake of myself
And to cause pain
To those who inflict it so well

I can't take these feelings
They use me up
And take me down
And my state of mind
Is down and out
And my heart is so depressed
That my mind must follow
Then my entire existence
Doesn't matter

I tried to be the best
And I turned into the worst
And I try to go unnoticed
But the opposite occurs
And I'm left in the dust

And opposites attract
And the similar divide
And I must be the same
As my worst enemy
Or we would have attracted
My epiphany [comments] => 2 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 48 [informant] => essentially9 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

My Hatred, My Epiphany

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 09:07:15 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My Hatred, My Epiphany

Most of my feelings
Are cut short
I'm advised
And I get angered
Without reprise

I hate my life
I hate everything
And I can't get away
From it all, at all
And I wish that I didn't feel
Surrounded by oppression
Feeling aggression
And wanting to hurt others
For the sake of myself
And to cause pain
To those who inflict it so well

I can't take these feelings
They use me up
And take me down
And my state of mind
Is down and out
And my heart is so depressed
That my mind must follow
Then my entire existence
Doesn't matter

I tried to be the best
And I turned into the worst
And I try to go unnoticed
But the opposite occurs
And I'm left in the dust

And opposites attract
And the similar divide
And I must be the same
As my worst enemy
Or we would have attracted
My epiphany

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2004-04-29 21:07:15]
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Re: My Hatred, My Epiphany (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 10:26:17 PM AEST
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wow i could easily feel every words and i love the rhymes

Re: My Hatred, My Epiphany (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 10:14:28 PM AEST
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What caught me was the title..Your use of words is so perfect..This poem is so great.

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