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Array ( [sid] => 45516 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother [time] => 2004-04-30 00:23:28 [hometext] => My Gram passed on 4-7-04 a few hours after I posted a comment in a forum that I take care of her. [bodytext] => Goodbye my dear sweet grandmother
You're finally on your way
I pray your trip is short and sweet
Your suffering stopped today

Goodbye my dear sweet grandmother
I'll miss you, oh, so much!
But you just weren't at all the same
Since your hospital stay last March

I'm glad you passed in your sleep
I've been praying all along
That you wouldn't suffer horribly
For you, that would be wrong!

You gave so much to all you knew
I'm sorry your life was hell
So now, Grandmother,sleep in peace
In Heaven you will dwell

So, goodbye, my dear sweet grandmother
You're with my dear son now
Please take care for someday I'll be
With both of you, I vow!

So......Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother
I know you're in Heaven now. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 530 [topic] => 52 [informant] => thumper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 105 [ratings] => 21 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother

Contributed by thumper on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:23:28 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



Goodbye my dear sweet grandmother
You're finally on your way
I pray your trip is short and sweet
Your suffering stopped today

Goodbye my dear sweet grandmother
I'll miss you, oh, so much!
But you just weren't at all the same
Since your hospital stay last March

I'm glad you passed in your sleep
I've been praying all along
That you wouldn't suffer horribly
For you, that would be wrong!

You gave so much to all you knew
I'm sorry your life was hell
So now, Grandmother,sleep in peace
In Heaven you will dwell

So, goodbye, my dear sweet grandmother
You're with my dear son now
Please take care for someday I'll be
With both of you, I vow!

So......Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother
I know you're in Heaven now.




Copyright © thumper ... [ 2004-04-30 00:23:28]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:38:51 AM AEST
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So sorry about your lose but the suffering has ended.
This is a very touching, strong, yet tender write.
I'm sure she's watching over u now.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 12:48:41 AM AEST
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Im so sorry for your loss losing a grandmother is a heart ripper for sure I still miss mine.......

Your memories will hold you near her until you meet again she will never be far from you........

Huggssssssss

Michelle


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 02:02:06 AM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss. My maternal grandmother was one of the dearest people in my life. I miss her so much. This was very loving.

Rita


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 06:45:18 AM AEST
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I am so sorry for your loss...
"So, goodbye, my dear sweet grandmother
You're with my dear son now
Please take care for someday I'll be
With both of you, I vow!"..
this is really heart moving..very sorry..
venkat


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by Hurretje on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 06:20:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful and deeply touching...
Greetz and strength to you!
Hur


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by bluoreo on Tuesday, 11th May 2004 @ 07:24:27 AM AEST
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I hope you find a way to see through this. It was a very good poem. It felt like a song.
-eric


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 07:49:16 AM AEST
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What a lasting tribute to your beloved GrandMother. She must have been a very sweet person for you to write this way. You have my deepest sympathy on your sad loss.

bernard.


Re: Goodbye My Dear Sweet Grandmother (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 07:15:47 AM AEST
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Thumper, I am so sorry for your loss. You are right. You will be with the both of them again. May God bless your heart. Take care. *S* Cynthia




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