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CHILLIN WITH THIS AFFLITION
Contributed by
justinblue
on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:19:48 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Enraged with this internal force of ambition
But kept back with a spine chillin affliction
Taxied around by a rebelious addiction
Unable to escape utter submission
Somtimes looking for the solution
Other times waiting for a revolution
But always rehearsing the same rendition
A new girl a new audition
Contemplating my succesion
Rapidly feeling a tinglly sensation
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2004-04-30 11:19:48]
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Re: CHILLIN WITH THIS AFFLITION
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by lil_angel on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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| Excellent job! Very good! |
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Re: CHILLIN WITH THIS AFFLITION
(User Rating: 1 )
by justinblue on
Friday, 30th April 2004 @ 11:27:03 AM AEST
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| the word afflition is a typeo its supposed to be affliction |
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