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Array ( [sid] => 45769 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue is the colour [time] => 2004-05-01 17:46:15 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Blue boy,
Got me good.
It's just a little of this
And more of another
In me.

He's got the weakness,
Turn the heat down
By the bye.
I shudder when I think,
But I let him in
To sin against,
So lay the fault again.
Lines are crossed
Where he's drawn.

Blue boy,
Shade every mood
I've ever known,
Got me where
I wasn't going,
Caught me when
I wasn't looking.
Lucky love
Or wasted journey?
When boy meets girl
And falls asunder under
His spell...?

Blue is the colour
Neath my skin. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 43 [informant] => reilt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Blue is the colour

Contributed by reilt on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Blue boy,
Got me good.
It's just a little of this
And more of another
In me.

He's got the weakness,
Turn the heat down
By the bye.
I shudder when I think,
But I let him in
To sin against,
So lay the fault again.
Lines are crossed
Where he's drawn.

Blue boy,
Shade every mood
I've ever known,
Got me where
I wasn't going,
Caught me when
I wasn't looking.
Lucky love
Or wasted journey?
When boy meets girl
And falls asunder under
His spell...?

Blue is the colour
Neath my skin.

Copyright © reilt ... [ 2004-05-01 17:46:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:52:24 PM AEST
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Some loves are like that. I really like this. I like the way it describes that connection--the oneness. Nice stuff.
Stitch

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by reilt on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 05:57:47 PM AEST
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oooops....i t's meant to read

WHEN GIRL MEETS BOY...

but i put it the other way round by mistake!!!

thanks a million for reading...gra...dee*

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:01:35 PM AEST
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I think I could ramble endlessly about the color blue. So many times i've felt the same way.

I certainly could relate to this one.

Kie

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by Crys on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:12:55 PM AEST
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Everyone takes to a poem differently, and I see this as a play on the line "Love is Blind". You know it's bad and it shouldn't be done, but you follow your heart instead of you head. Wonderful write. Emotional indeed.

*~*Crys*~*

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:20:57 PM AEST
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This poem flows wonderfully! I really like this one.

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 06:32:44 PM AEST
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well written with a touch of the bittersweet:) hugs n' love nessa

Re: Blue is the colour (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Saturday, 1st May 2004 @ 08:47:38 PM AEST
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adorable

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