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Cut it deep
Watch the crimson oil seep
Feel the pain
Melt away
Dream no more
For a better day
Body numb
Face is white
The Day of Death
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The Day Of Death

Contributed by Delusions on Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Cut the flesh
Cut it deep
Watch the crimson oil seep
Feel the pain
Melt away
Dream no more
For a better day
Body numb
Face is white
The Day of Death
Now in sight.....

Copyright © Delusions ... [ 2002-10-03 23:30:00]
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Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by aernby on Thursday, 3rd October 2002 @ 11:40:23 PM AEST
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This is a dark one -- good write

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 04:23:22 AM AEST
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it sounds like those old black and white horror movies, the narrating creepy voice in the background as the blood curling scream of the damsel in distress arises... okay, i haven't been watching too much tv, HONEST! he he... GOOD WRITING HERE!! kudos! ;0)
-daniel

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Sonibe on Sunday, 15th December 2002 @ 12:38:26 AM AEST
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this is a great poem....keep up the good work....

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 06:47:34 AM AEST
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i can really relate to this.. thx for sharing it :)
im guessing we'd get along actually lol

gem xXx

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Thursday, 19th December 2002 @ 05:47:53 AM AEST
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nice one. ive done some very similar to this......

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:58:48 AM AEST
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a very good but sad poem, great work.

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 15th July 2003 @ 12:28:24 PM AEST
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awesome...

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 03:25:02 AM AEST
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so short and yet so full of strong emotion and so compelling. this poem is one of my favourites after readin all of them tonight haha. i commented on them all so don't blame me if some sound like the others lol. ur one of my greatest inspirations and my muse....thank u sweety.
mwa
becca ~xoxo~

Re: The Day Of Death (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Thursday, 30th September 2004 @ 08:16:34 AM AEST
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I remember reading and commenting on this a long while ago,
reading it again, and it was like the first time

5 out of 5

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