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Get the pain,
Back through my veins.
Open my holes,
Release some cold.
I want the pain to stop!!!
But I can’t do it…

I can’t do it,
There’s no longer a solid kick!
People love me,
And I’m putting them through sh**!
Scars are growing on me.
I WANT TO GET OUT!!
I sometimes hear voices.
‘Don’t do it’, they shout!

My mates on drugs.
And I’m scared, coz she can’t stop.
We’re kind of the same,
Both our heads have gone flop.
But she won’t tell,
About what’s gone wrong for her.
So here I am. I’m sinking, in the water.

I half don’t wanna do it.
Coz people care.
But Tara’s just Tara.
No fuss with who she tares!

Addictions a hard thing,
To give in.
It leaves me shaking.
Feeling sick.

I want to help Tara.
And I want to die.
Tara will be Tara.
She breaks me inside.

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Drugged And Slashed.

Contributed by deathdrop on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:36:10 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

I need to slash,
Get the pain,
Back through my veins.
Open my holes,
Release some cold.
I want the pain to stop!!!
But I can’t do it…

I can’t do it,
There’s no longer a solid kick!
People love me,
And I’m putting them through sh**!
Scars are growing on me.
I WANT TO GET OUT!!
I sometimes hear voices.
‘Don’t do it’, they shout!

My mates on drugs.
And I’m scared, coz she can’t stop.
We’re kind of the same,
Both our heads have gone flop.
But she won’t tell,
About what’s gone wrong for her.
So here I am. I’m sinking, in the water.

I half don’t wanna do it.
Coz people care.
But Tara’s just Tara.
No fuss with who she tares!

Addictions a hard thing,
To give in.
It leaves me shaking.
Feeling sick.

I want to help Tara.
And I want to die.
Tara will be Tara.
She breaks me inside.

Copyright © deathdrop ... [ 2004-05-02 06:36:10]
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Re: Drugged And Slashed. (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:05:03 AM AEST
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I think your poem is good.
The best part is the starkness and truth.
Keep helping people and never give up.

Re: Drugged And Slashed. (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 10:24:32 AM AEST
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I wish I knew what to tell you, there is alot I can say, the question is if some one gave you real answers would you fight your encampment to follow them or would you say it was too hard. Tell me in your next poem I'll be looking for it.

Re: Drugged And Slashed. (User Rating: 1 )
by Twisted_Babi_Angel on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 02:53:13 PM AEST
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I love ur poem. It reminds me of how life really is...Im goin through the same sht. I cant wait to read more of you stuff :) Kisha

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