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Array ( [sid] => 45864 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It's over [time] => 2004-05-02 11:53:46 [hometext] => Please comment on this please [bodytext] => If I needed you would you be here for me,
If I needed you could you comfort me,
When I need you the most would you come runing in a hurry,
Or love me for nothing,
Time and time again I wonder why,
You waste your time,
On me but then you claim you love me,
Sometimes I just can't see,
How you can hurt me so bad,
Then you start to get mad,
When I have done nothing,
But you always wan't something,
From me and I can't deal with it anymore,
So please just leave me alone,
If I asked you why you loved me,
Don't turn your back on me,
And if I asked you to hold me,
Please don't look at me,
Like I did something wrong,
I just feel like all along,
You were using me to get to someone else,
Well guess what I can't help,
You anymore and now I have to tell you that,
It's over

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 6 [informant] => luckycharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

It's over

Contributed by luckycharm on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 11:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

If I needed you would you be here for me,
If I needed you could you comfort me,
When I need you the most would you come runing in a hurry,
Or love me for nothing,
Time and time again I wonder why,
You waste your time,
On me but then you claim you love me,
Sometimes I just can't see,
How you can hurt me so bad,
Then you start to get mad,
When I have done nothing,
But you always wan't something,
From me and I can't deal with it anymore,
So please just leave me alone,
If I asked you why you loved me,
Don't turn your back on me,
And if I asked you to hold me,
Please don't look at me,
Like I did something wrong,
I just feel like all along,
You were using me to get to someone else,
Well guess what I can't help,
You anymore and now I have to tell you that,
It's over

Copyright © luckycharm ... [ 2004-05-02 11:53:46]
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Re: It's over (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 12:01:19 PM AEST
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strong words, with great stucture, but i wouldn't blame you for your feelings.
love hurts. it doesn't always work. i hope you feel better soon. it good that you can vent your anger in poetry, this is a great one by the way!

from deathdrop.

Re: It's over (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:34:37 PM AEST
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i think it takes a pretty confident and strong person to say this

Re: It's over (User Rating: 1 )
by Sweetpoptartz07 on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:12:03 PM AEST
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Hye Sweetie..i have been there many many many times when all they say is love n u belive it but when u say its true but they just hurt you with lies n lost of trust!!!! hold in there its goin to be okay...im sur eur hurting lettign him go..but things wil get better!!! good job though great write!:)

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