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The Jezebel In Me
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A day in the life of Jezebel
Ive had my turn, and now Ill tell
I met a boy and reeled him in
But he, not me, heard violins
I thought of love and said it too
But took it back and made him blue
Later, we did reminisce
Of every time that we had kissed
Alas! Hed found another girl
But when I came round, twas she that hed hurled
He tossed her aside as we met again
But with little time, I knew we were friends
He still doesnt see it. Hes totally blind.
I wish that the spell would break and not bind.
This spell that I cast, to cast is my curse
To counter the spell, it just made it worse
It seems that my curse is that I cast spells
And right away the lump in my throat swells
It is not easy and I break his heart
Yet he still loves me just as from the start
I want him to leave and to be my friend
But he will not see the absolute end
He knows that its over yet cannot see
That there is a life, a life without me
So I just move on and ignore the past
As he stumbles round as if it will last
Im through with playing and I hate this game
I will not budge and I dont feel the same
No matter how much he wants it to change
Its simple as this: Im not in his range.
Copyright ©
liquidsunshine
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2004-05-02 16:30:43]
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 04:37:54 PM AEST
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| Preeeetty. @_@ I love the mention of me in this one. XD Great, Chels. |
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by lonely_kakashi on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 06:00:49 PM AEST
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i would not worry your not the only one to have done this...though i do not know
whether i am talking about myself or someone else, but anyway....
Great poem, i can understand the 'game' aspect and how your through playing, kinda
rang a few bells, things do get tiring very quickly sometimes.
:D
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by lifefliesby on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 07:22:50 PM AEST
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honesty at it's best
a great write with a true, common outlook on 'love'
and although honesty may hurt, it's good in the end... but better in the beginning
thanx
love always,
Jared |
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by Juliet on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 01:18:51 PM AEST
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| Awww, this poem is so cute! Cool title. For some reason, it makes me laugh! |
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by Lost_Shadow on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 05:43:49 PM AEST
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| It's a patient read, and very enjoyable. though I have yet to experience such a thing |
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th May 2004 @ 11:20:48 AM AEST
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Hope he gets the message!
wildejohnny. |
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:58:41 PM AEST
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Not an easy situation. But sometimes doing what is right causes pain for one who is doing wrong. What must be done, must.
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Re: The Jezebel In Me
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by eatfresh22 on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 04:32:41 PM AEST
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Good poem. I liked the title...it was pretty catchy. Doesn't it stink to be wanted?!? Sounds like it wouldn't be that horrible or a problem, but I think that your poem depicts otherwise. Well written.
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