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Array ( [sid] => 4591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rejected [time] => 2002-10-04 08:50:00 [hometext] => I tried to find a way to express the emotions one feels when they are rejected. The anger, the hopelessness and the love that still remains... [bodytext] => I felt your pain, you didn’t know,
You tried so hard not to let it show.
I laughed with you but you weren’t there,
Your happiness you wouldn’t share.
I held out my hand, you stood on your own,
You said you wanted, to do it alone.
I tried so hard to do my part,
But you don’t want to share your heart.

So tell me now where do I go,
It’s you I love so I don’t know.
I’m lost and angry, so confused,
With all I gave I’m feeling used.
I know you didn’t ask for it,
And frankly you don’t give a s***.
But tell me now what can I do,
I know I’m still in love with you

The hardest part I have to say,
Knowing you don’t feel this way,
Is that there’s nothing I can do,
I’d still give all to be with you.
You’ll always be my one desire,
The one who sets my soul on fire,
And so I hope when love finds you,
The one you love will love you too.

By: Doug Morton
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Rejected

Contributed by wordpoet on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 08:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I felt your pain, you didn’t know,
You tried so hard not to let it show.
I laughed with you but you weren’t there,
Your happiness you wouldn’t share.
I held out my hand, you stood on your own,
You said you wanted, to do it alone.
I tried so hard to do my part,
But you don’t want to share your heart.

So tell me now where do I go,
It’s you I love so I don’t know.
I’m lost and angry, so confused,
With all I gave I’m feeling used.
I know you didn’t ask for it,
And frankly you don’t give a s***.
But tell me now what can I do,
I know I’m still in love with you

The hardest part I have to say,
Knowing you don’t feel this way,
Is that there’s nothing I can do,
I’d still give all to be with you.
You’ll always be my one desire,
The one who sets my soul on fire,
And so I hope when love finds you,
The one you love will love you too.

By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com

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Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 11:09:13 AM AEST
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*I am weeping with you* this is so sad

Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 4th October 2002 @ 12:17:57 PM AEST
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This expresses exactly how it feels to be rejected - the hopelessness of it all, and to still feel the love anyway.

Well written.

Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 03:29:24 AM AEST
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You tried to find a way? I think you hit the nail on the head! This is amazing... this is one I'll be printing and saving. Great work.

Curtis

Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by MisterRight on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 03:33:42 AM AEST
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Wow again... I just read this three more times and felt I had to comment again. There are several occasions within the past year where this poem would have expressed my feelings to the T. Masterful work WordPoet, you truely have a gift. Keep it up.

Curtis

Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by ginsdance on Saturday, 5th October 2002 @ 06:09:08 AM AEST
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Wow... I'm with Curtis, you hit the nail on the head... And I'm glad that you still want her happiness. That's the way that I have always viewed love, no matter what else happens, you just want them to be happy. With or without you. This was a very beautiful poem! Thank you for sharing it!
Gin

Re: Rejected (User Rating: 1 )
by PrEtTy-PlEaSe on Sunday, 6th October 2002 @ 08:17:13 AM AEST
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Extremely touching and true...Very well written and emotions are relayed in a fine manner...I wish I could write as well as you :) ... simply great!

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