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Array ( [sid] => 46135 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fantasizing about Alcohol [time] => 2004-05-04 11:29:04 [hometext] => Hey guys! I'm just an under-aged teenager who feels that alcohol 'must' taste pretty damn good! But, who's to say, eh? [lol] [bodytext] => A recurrent thirst that can be quenched by only one,
‘tis the thirst of desire that strangles teenagers, each one,
Fasting for days is naught when you thirst,
Not water or lemonade, but a Strawberry Margarita first
Now, don’t get me wrong; I don’t drink till I fall,
In fact, my lips are virgins in the face of Alcohol,
‘tis just that I’m intrigued by the class of its look,
It certainly beats reading some silly old book
Tequila Sunrise, Rum Punch and much more,
I’m sure it tastes more divine than the soft drinks I adore,
I sip my lukewarm lemonade as I fantasize in my mind,
When will I taste an actual Cocktail or any of its kind?
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Fantasizing about Alcohol

Contributed by Mihiri on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 11:29:04 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

A recurrent thirst that can be quenched by only one,
‘tis the thirst of desire that strangles teenagers, each one,
Fasting for days is naught when you thirst,
Not water or lemonade, but a Strawberry Margarita first
Now, don’t get me wrong; I don’t drink till I fall,
In fact, my lips are virgins in the face of Alcohol,
‘tis just that I’m intrigued by the class of its look,
It certainly beats reading some silly old book
Tequila Sunrise, Rum Punch and much more,
I’m sure it tastes more divine than the soft drinks I adore,
I sip my lukewarm lemonade as I fantasize in my mind,
When will I taste an actual Cocktail or any of its kind?

Copyright © Mihiri ... [ 2004-05-04 11:29:04]
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Re: Fantasizing about Alcohol (User Rating: 1 )
by PoloRM on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:14:17 PM AEST
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Hey,
I'm 17 years old. And I don't know about your country, but here people drink alcohol even though they are underage. Seeing a drunk 15 years old teenagers is not that rare. As for the taste, I really don't like it, and even though my parents even encourage me to drink at least a bit of beer I still prefer a coca cola. Then again... that's only me =)

Good write, nice humor lol And getting drunk is not a good thing.

Cheers,
PoloRM

Re: Fantasizing about Alcohol (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:43:27 PM AEST
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*sigh* you sound like my best friend... that worries me!! ah well, still just a fantasy. interesting no doubt, and still... whatever, good write! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Fantasizing about Alcohol (User Rating: 1 )
by Ravisada on Monday, 10th May 2004 @ 03:57:47 AM AEST
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"A poison never taste good, so as alcohol"
Ravi

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