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Array ( [sid] => 46148 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DRINK PLEASE DRINK!!!!!! [time] => 2004-05-04 12:45:09 [hometext] => PLEASE READ! THERES NOTHING BETTER THAN A NICE BROKEN HEART RIGHT? [bodytext] => drink my blood
drink my soul
drink all of me,the turn and go

kut me up
sice my veins
crumble my heart,into little grains

whats this for
what is the reason
is their a significance,for all this treason

this ***** was useless
was useless
nothing to gain
just another time,that i was caused pain

i hate you now
more than ever
dont want to see you,now till forever

so finish my blood
gargle my soul
what could of been, we will never know [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jc_92024 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

DRINK PLEASE DRINK!!!!!!

Contributed by jc_92024 on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:45:09 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

drink my blood
drink my soul
drink all of me,the turn and go

kut me up
sice my veins
crumble my heart,into little grains

whats this for
what is the reason
is their a significance,for all this treason

this ***** was useless
was useless
nothing to gain
just another time,that i was caused pain

i hate you now
more than ever
dont want to see you,now till forever

so finish my blood
gargle my soul
what could of been, we will never know

Copyright © jc_92024 ... [ 2004-05-04 12:45:09]
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Re: DRINK PLEASE DRINK!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by JennyFruFru on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 12:49:30 PM AEST
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woah ... thats very powerful... i can feel ur pain and your hatred in all you words..... gargle my soul... wow... im impressed... its very graphic....

Re: DRINK PLEASE DRINK!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 02:12:17 PM AEST
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so long as the heart is diced up and sauted nicely it's good... lol, good writing - thou quite dark! ;0)
~Remy~

Re: DRINK PLEASE DRINK!!!!!! (User Rating: 1 )
by krisseee on Thursday, 6th May 2004 @ 10:05:05 AM AEST
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great stuff!
the kind of poem that i can read and read and read. maybe i'm just a miserable bstrd, but anyway, nice.

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