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Array ( [sid] => 46154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blood On Hands [time] => 2004-05-04 13:28:31 [hometext] => I want to hear your comments! [bodytext] => Blood on hands, Knife in hand
I cry and shout
Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?

Thank u mom, Thank u dad,
Thank u for being here
For letting me get this far,
For being blind and not help
For neglecting me
For seing me as a burden
For telling me I'm a mistake
For making my life a living hell

I didnt want it to end it this way
With blood on my hands and a knife in hand
Blood of the man i just killed

Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?
Taking somebody elses life instead of mine
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Cursed_Witch [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Blood On Hands

Contributed by Cursed_Witch on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:28:31 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Blood on hands, Knife in hand
I cry and shout
Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?

Thank u mom, Thank u dad,
Thank u for being here
For letting me get this far,
For being blind and not help
For neglecting me
For seing me as a burden
For telling me I'm a mistake
For making my life a living hell

I didnt want it to end it this way
With blood on my hands and a knife in hand
Blood of the man i just killed

Why did it have to come to this?
Did it have to end this way?
Taking somebody elses life instead of mine

Copyright © Cursed_Witch ... [ 2004-05-04 13:28:31]
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Re: Blood On Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:31:46 PM AEST
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wow, good write. I can identify with some of the things you're feeling in here. excellent!

Re: Blood On Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:40:05 PM AEST
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good, but i didnt really understand why it was the parents fault lol, sorry me dumb, good though, thought provoking, i supose by me not knowing the reason it allows me to use my imagination :)

Re: Blood On Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Tuesday, 4th May 2004 @ 01:59:59 PM AEST
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hum, i like that it's not a self-deprecating suicidal binge! interesting write, pointed questions - hopefully you find your answers. ;0)
~Remy~

Re: Blood On Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by CaddishCut on Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:45:53 PM AEST
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Remarkable! Nice flow

Re: Blood On Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by saphfyre on Sunday, 26th November 2006 @ 01:38:52 AM AEST
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lashing out... screaming..crying... its not in the poem, but its there

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